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Hullo all! This is kinda my first go at a jungle-ish track. Enjoy :P |
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this slipped down the list within a few seconds |
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give us time to download |
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A bit disorientating at times, but 2:15mins well spent. The breaks are a bit sloppy at times, but it kinda works out in the end. Amen, brother. |
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thx for listening ;-) |
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hey, i didn't like it. sorry :( |
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no need to appologise! thx for listening |
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i was trying to say it without sounding like an ass. |
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i guess the track is too sloppy to be spammed *spanks self* |
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it's not very junglish. the only connection i can make is the amen snare. give me some bouncy bass lines, some old school mc and im your man. |
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forget i ever mentioned the word jungle actually :P |
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it's not bad - it could use some work, but it's a good start! |
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thanks for listening m8. i agree now after looking over the track that it needs more work :-\ u are a loyal listener! |
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It's shit, sorry. I can't really think of any redeeming features of it. The production is poor, the beats are sloppy and it is dull. Sorry for being so negative. |
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you're right. it is shit |
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The drums don't really sound right. I think you should definetly avoid cutting that break into the individual sounds, you should just use larger segments of it. |
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no, i disagree. it's a song that could be re-done and salvaged. it isn't hopeless. the basic song isn't bad, but the sounds themselves and programming need more care and work. i suggest that you start over with the same riffs and melodies and essential ideas, but try new ways of expressing them. try taking it in different directions until you find something you like. this sort of music entails a lot of attention to detail and hard work - you just have to keep at it and put more effort into the song. but there's no reason to give up on it. |
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Nah the Amen stands up well to individual slices but you have to make sure you sequece them properly and the most important thing is get them at the right BPM. |
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that was a follow-up to razorblade's last comment about what ecnadniarb said. |
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it's shit i'm sorry. i shouldn't have even posted it. it needs way more work. this isn't up to any standard thx for listening ;) |
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I've posted mostly pigs on the board...it something everyone does at some stage...I would rather people just be honest though. |
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I hope I don't do this again. it's potentially reputation ruining |
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dont talk yourself down |
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This wasn't awful mate. It just needs polish. Trust me on that because all my stuff needs it too. |
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i kinda like flowing melodies in behind. slow beat would (imo) fit better. |
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i liked the melodies, the break attempt wasnt bad, i cant do that |
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thx m8. u the best! and thanks to everyone despite the poor quality. i shall be reworking and polishing |
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