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offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-27 10:08 [#01437203]
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hi, i did this in fruity loops in a matter of a few hours.
i'd like to thank the bud-brownie i ate that inspired this.
it's called 'crystal lake', because that's what i was
thinking about when i made it - a frozen mass of water.

here's the track, let me know what i can do to improve
it/finish it. one person suggested using female vocals
somewhere. hmm...

crystal lake, ver.3

 

offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-27 10:09 [#01437204]
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oh yeah, and if you have the time, i have a few more tracks
up in that same directory
(http://www.patternawareness.org/mp3/newersongs)


 

offline ecnadniarb on 2004-12-27 10:10 [#01437208]
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"here's the track, let me know what i can do to improve
it/finish it. one person suggested using female vocals
somewhere. hmm..."

I suggested adding a delete key, then a right click in the
recycle bin, and maybe an Empty in there as there.


 

offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-27 10:13 [#01437214]
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you didn't even listen to it

=/

 

offline ecnadniarb on 2004-12-27 10:16 [#01437219]
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hehe I am listening to it now :)

It's pretty good. Nice and laid back. I quite like the
beats, I like the bass. There are certain sections that I'm
not a massive fan of. Changes in the bass are a bit too
expected. I can't see a female vocal fitting in there.
It's sounds pretty good the way it is though. I wouldn't
know what to recommend to change it.


 

offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-27 10:18 [#01437225]
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thanks for listening this time, haha.

i think i need to add another change in the melody,
especially i the bassline. i've been trying to work more
with melodies and less with beats, as i tend to concentrate
on the beats and take them too far to fit a melody/groove
in.



 

offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-27 13:24 [#01437438]
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bumppp

 

offline yann_g from now on 2004-12-27 17:13 [#01437657]
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nice... i think there should be something else when the
melody disappears near 2:20... maybe some more rhythm sounds
or something, dunno...


 

offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-28 07:48 [#01437998]
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thanks yann_g, i'll take that into consideration.



 

offline Raz0rBlade_uk on 2004-12-28 09:01 [#01438066]
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This is very good. The beats are nice and same goes for the
backing synth. It feels like it should be in a video game or
something. Good Job!


 

offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-28 09:03 [#01438071]
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thanks!!

 

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