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Not me singing,but the singing melody and all other music is by me though. What do you think? I like it though it´s a little bit odd. It´s not pop, it´s not a lullaby, it´s not a joke, it´s not a poem, but maybe something in between. My first try in this "genre". |
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ok, this is the first thing i hear from you, surprised a bit, it's nice, and it's nice that she sounds human.. melody = good. |
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thanks, i´ve had a couple of other ideed very different tracks on the board too, but they all have new versions now wich I haven´t got the gots to put out again... |
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come on people...be nice!! it's christmas time. |
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sounds nice! real lovely voice! |
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Well, two comments is better than none, thanks and Merry Christmas!! |
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i think that it's a good start, but the melody could use some work. i like how it's simple, but it just sort of follows the chords - it doesn't become very memorable. also, her phrasing doesn't really flow well. but again, i enjoyed the minimal production and the lyrics, and her voice. all three things work well, imo. i just think they need some fine-tuning. |
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well, ivé but some finetuning in it, but maybe it needs more, not sure about changing the melody tho... |
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wich part of the melody you think needs fixing? |
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this is cruel! :.( |
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easy there... i just now saw your last question. i listened to it again just now. as i said before, i think the melody that she sings could be better - mostly in the second verse, it gets a bit flat-sounding. she sort of hops around the octaves, but that's ornamentation of one note and it doesn't make for an interesting melody. i think the main problem is her phrasing... the last part of the first verse, when she sings the extra "even emptier" it sort of sounds awkward to me. the rest of the first verse is nice - well sung. |
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I won´t get her to sing it agian, but thanks for the detailed opinion!!! That´s stuff I really appriciate hearing!! |
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well, nice:) |
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is it you or chris clark in you avatar melack? |
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Analords! :P |
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