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wimp
on 2004-11-18 21:00 [#01399586]
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Hi there, here are two songs I wrote in May '04 that had been stuck on Acidpro, until I recently bypassed an mp3 plugin problem. If you've got some free minutes (4 all together for both), give 'em a listen, and if you'd like, let me know what you thought of them.
Hey & Oh Snap
Thanks!
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2004-11-18 22:02 [#01399596]
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both of these are pretty neat! i dig these... both worth checking out, although i prefer oh snap a bit more, with those glitchy breaks.
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wimp
on 2004-11-18 23:11 [#01399625]
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Thanks! Oddly enough I'm a bit biased with Hey because I wrote it on a particularly happy day, but I'd have to agree with those breaks at the end of Oh Snap; they were fun to work with.
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wisp
from Buffalo (United States) on 2004-11-18 23:25 [#01399628]
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heya.. i checked it out (mainly because i thought the four letter W name looked comforting. heh ) andi really dug it. i enjoyed the melodies,and break chopping.great work.
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wimp
on 2004-11-19 10:20 [#01399927]
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Any more listeners?
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wimp
on 2004-11-19 13:09 [#01400123]
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Bump.
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horsefactory
from 💠 (United Kingdom) on 2004-11-19 13:27 [#01400130]
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These were excellent! Sorry, I can't give you and kind of worthwhile feedback, because I'm really lazy and dumb. They were excellent, that is all.
More people should definitely have a listen. And don't forget to hear the wonderful "house volume" while you are there.
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wimp
on 2004-11-20 10:51 [#01400721]
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Thanks, Horsefactory, your endorsement is (as always) greatly appreciated. I missed Wisp's post when I tried bumping this the other day. Coming from that fella, dang.
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plantre
from United States on 2004-11-20 10:58 [#01400731]
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hey is fantastic, i love the sample in there that says "hey" its perfect man, perfect. the only thing i didnt really care for was the introduction, i think you could have started this one out mroe traditionally and been fine. but that is most likely just my preference, im too much of a purist for my own good.
it seems like you are consistently doing some quality work, and it shows with oh snap. im not usually into glitchy material, but this is pulled of well. i agree that hey is the standout between the two.
cheers to you and keep it up man!
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wimp
on 2004-11-22 17:03 [#01403021]
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Last bump promised.
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carrot
from United Kingdom on 2004-11-22 17:55 [#01403057]
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I like Oh Snap lots, nice cutting and breaks. Gels together pretty smoothly I think. I'm listening rrreally quiet atm cos it's late but will defos listen to it more.
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plaidzebra
from so long, xlt on 2004-11-24 12:10 [#01404528]
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i liked "hey," very listenable and sweet, upbeat melody. i'd like to hear it elaborated into a more complete form. very enjoyable.
"oh snap" didn't have as pleasing a melody, a good track but stylistically not my thing...
"house volume" sounds like a demo, but a really great demo. i really like what you've done with the percussion, it's got a nice loose feel (almost an epic rock vibe) and the melody is sad and sweet. glad to've heard it... the ending is a painful wimpus interruptus...
as far as feedback goes, it's probably not too helpful to just say i liked your track, or i didn't like your track, but i've never gotten much useful advice from the board so i just assume that you'll be somewhat interested to hear what some stranger had to say about your work...
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morguean
from Calgary (Canada) on 2004-11-24 12:48 [#01404572]
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Both are really awesome, i love the happy mood that hey gives off. Great stuff!
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deepspace9mm
from filth on 2004-11-24 13:39 [#01404644]
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These are pretty good. Of the two, i think i prefer "oh snap", that sudden kick from the clean synth melody into drill breaks is really quite nice. "Hey" is decent as well, but although it's got a vaguely similar palate of sound, it feels more "anonymous" somehow. I dunno.
P.S. "House Volume" is still totally excellent and i listen to it on a regular basis. <3
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X-tomatic
from ze war room on 2004-11-24 13:56 [#01404669]
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I really like housevolume..... except for the ending ||:(
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