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offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-11-18 09:15 [#01398977]
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http://www.patternawareness.org/mp3/bastardsonofgod.mp3

if you have a second to tear my work apart, lemme know what
you think. i did this 6 months ago using FLStudio. i like a
lot of it, but some of it needs work. ;]


 

offline r40f from qrters tea party on 2004-11-18 09:30 [#01398981]
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i think it's produced well. drums and some subtle wobbly
sounds. it's a simple idea - it's cool. i wouldn't say
it's mindblowing, but i like it for what it is. the cymbal
could be a little louder during the main rhythm. perhaps
introduce some new synth sounds in the last minute or so.
nice work!


 

offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-11-18 09:35 [#01398983]
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thankyou! like i said, it's a few months old, haven't really
touched it in a while.

if you have the chance, let me know what you think of this:

http://www.patternawareness.org/mp3/thissoundspurple.mp3

i did that about 2.5 years ago using Cool Edit Pro and an
old yamaha synth, no sequencing, all recorded and hand
chopped. hehe..


 

offline r40f from qrters tea party on 2004-11-18 09:37 [#01398984]
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bastardsonofgod.mp3
thissoundspurple.mp3

 

offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-11-18 09:38 [#01398985]
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oh yeah, really shitty mastering, rather, no mastering..

 

offline r40f from qrters tea party on 2004-11-18 09:42 [#01398988]
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this sounds purple - now this track definitely needs
something... it needs either a melody or chuck d. it's a
great start - the drums sound cool, that little bass riff is
good, it all flows really well. but there has to be
something over it to carry it along.


 

offline somejerk from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-11-18 09:46 [#01398993]
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right on, thanks for your time. unfortunately the purple
one's original files were lost when my computer crashed, so
the only thing i have is that mp3 file. i have more songs
i'm working on, more 'upfront', dancefloor oriented. i'll
post them in a short while. thanks again!


 

offline Dannn_ from United Kingdom on 2004-11-18 11:27 [#01399070]
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bastard one has very nice drums i think, but yeah its a
little bit forgettable.


 

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