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< track of mine got really nice feedback, and I really have to thank you! Now this is the new version, about 5 minutes longer... hope you like it. Some of the mixing is still bad I know.... Don´t fear your future Thanks in advice! |
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Not Found The requested URL /robix/fil/Mandelum-suru.mp3 was not found on this server. |
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damit |
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rename the MP3 without the spaces and ´ symbol. |
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it work´s... please give some thoughtful comment, I have been working on this half a year now... |
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the beats sound a bit forced maybe (because you're held back because of the program measure settings, maybe, that's what i sometimes feel and try to solve), the second part def is better and quite enjoyable |
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there are lot´s of you online, couln´t you please review this shit, so I could get some sleep, sorry for the unpoliteness! |
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It's fucking good. It's perverted video game music. Highly enjoyable. |
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He should really tell you to go fuck yourself, you do realise that do you Mr Big? :P |
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yeah :D he's cracking his head coming up with polite excuses though :) |
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will review it tomorrow. |
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Hahah, shameless :D |
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lol, well thanks, for this night(living in finland), I´ll come back tomorrow, and decide, weather I will get myself a proper job or continue banging out mediocre music... |
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now it´s tomorrow... at least here in Finland... |
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i have listened, it was not my cup of tea at all =/ sorry it's teh "style" that doesnt suite me, sounds pretty nicely mixed though, i did not notice anything disturbing or so =D im just not the guy to comment on a track like this, at least i listened! =D |
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sorry, too cliché for me... nothing really suprising happens, which doesn't have to be a negative thing, but here it is. the sounds are a bit flat, sounds plastic to me. especially the drum sounds. hm, i do like the little melody in octaves around 3:30 tho... but i'm afraid that's it... it sounds as if you put in too many ideas into one piece, it tends to get a bit boring. enough negativity, it's not really my cup of tea either i'm afraid... |
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Alright, you are probobly right about the sounds, but I have been doing this for just e year no, so I´m not so advanced yet when it comes to sound. The idea is that it should be a bunch of different feelings all linked in one pice, and you should not remember the stuff from the beginning when it has ended. It is indeed hectic! But why cliche, I have personaly never heard anything like this although I don+t find this very good... but I do like the feeling |
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I think there is a bit too much different stuff in it. In the first third particularly I think it would be good to have a deeper harder kick drum as well as a lower impact one, I find with the fast drums there is too much of the kick. More different snare sounds too, and better ones. It definetly has some good moments in it |
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keep going, don't give up. you're getting closer. |
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thanks, you sead the word, I have been on really sad since most people don´t like tis music at all...well, I don´t like it myself either now... |
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working on a better version, so feedback have already been fruity |
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I like the bassline it starts out, but have to say that the way it's arranged is like it's a minimix of 3 songs or so. And even though it has changes it gets kinda tedious so to me it's definitely too long. I think the song could be kickass if you only kept the part with the bassline and use a harder drum in it or to climax it with. That said, I've heard a l o t worse. |
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what´s wrong with a minimix? |
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nothing wrong with a minimix, but it sounds like there is enough material for at least 3 tracks. |
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ok, but I will try to make it all better, and come back again... But I do´nt like tracks with only one idea.... I like when it bounces around, but maybe some parts arent tight enuff, is that the problem? |
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well, music with lots of ideas aren't any worse then music with just one idea. it's just that in this particular track it annoys me. it's too full with different stuff. on the other hand, sticking to one idea can quickly get very boring ofcourse. it's hard: you, as a composer/musician/whatever know the music so well, that you want to move on, and do a different theme/line/chords or something. but for others, who are hearing all this for the first time it gets too chaotic. at least, for me it did. i lost interest, because it sounded like you just put stuff next to each other... dunno, maybe it's all just a matter of taste, blahblahblah... |
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most people think like you, I know, you have a point, but to me it´s a style.... |
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most people think like you, I know, you have a point, but to me it´s a style.... |
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I promise I'll dL it later with feedback. |
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try not to react to criticism, there's always someone who hates any given track. don't let others perceptions get in the way of your pleasure... only you can decide if advice is helpful or useless... |
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I thought it was pretty good, nice drum work. I think it's the transitions between the "3 minimixes" that makes it sound a bit awkward. And It's definately too long. But The drums are pretty rad i must say. SOunds like a lot of work went into this song, you should keep at it! |
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for just a year of producing I think you are doing fine, good luck, a lot of people have their head so far stuck their ass they can't tell what is good electronic music any more IMO |
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thanks, I appriciate this feedback, becaouse this is really my first real attempt of doing a idm track... I want to keep the different parts, but I maybe make it shorter or try to make it more interresting... |
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How rude! Not in a bad way though. Sounds like you had fun making it, reminds me of twiddling with a monosynth. Good effort man, keep it coming. |
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I feel quite mono every now and then... |
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