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Just thought id post this i made to waste time. Yes, Another rib tickling disaster of a wanna be music-maker with no life. |
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i do like the drums on this one, i stil hate the sounds im making though :| |
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too much bass. you throw in some different rythms which are nice, but as a whole the song doesnt really go anywhere, which means you just need to add some more structure and variation. I've heard worse. |
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yeah, thanks for a positive reply. I know my songs are probably the worst on here but its not something i strive at. I need to take more time to add variation and structure like you (and everyone else) says. |
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theres no point posting your music on here unless you can think "wow, if someone else was me, i'd envy them" :) if you don't give a shit about your work, no one else will either. practice is always a good thing. just keep rinsing out masses of tracks; eventually you'll click and you'll get something amazing, or at least something to be proud of.. no one makes good music straight away, and no offence, but most people don't care for *bad* music much, not even in a funny way really (not more than once anyway) when i started making music it was 2 years before i was actually making stuff good enough for people to hear other than me, and its still not fantastic... i will listen to this any way, going for a camel smooth flavour, and then i shall cast opinion |
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not a bad start. the mix is the main problem. i don't think it's *just* that there's too much bass - all the levels are kind of screwy. the drums are barely audible, the synths are overpowering everything with that bassy glossy sound. i suggest: try and make the synths more defined (give them more shape rather than just rumbly) and bring up the drums a lot. also, one of your samples is a bit clicky. sorry if that sounds harsh - i'm just trying to be constructive. please don't take it personally. |
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no, that helps loads. I should try loads harder in making music |
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tbh the mix is so muddy that it makes it hard to comment. |
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the meldoy is nice, but you should make much more of the percussion. ram the rhthym home! |
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cool |
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