 |
|
You are not logged in! F.A.Q Log in Register |
 |
|
 |
 Now online (1)recycle ...and 362 guests Last 5 registered Oplandisks nothingstar N_loop yipe foxtrotromeo Browse members... |
 |
Members 8025Messages 2614106 Today 3 Topics 127542 |
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
I don't think I'm done with it.. but opinions on my personal favorite would be greatly appreciated. |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
i remember that last song you posted and i really liked it, so ill give this a listen |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
Sounds too much like you made a load of patterns using the same samples and placed them together randomly. There is no progression (from what I could tell), it seems to play one loop, then switches to another, then another, but they never really lead on from one another. The production is good, but I'd work more on cohesion. |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
Damn that was negative... you have some really cool sounds here but yeah, it just didn't seem to flow too well. |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
Its cool.. any advice given is appreciated. anyone else? |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
i agree with the horse, you have good segments but they need to transition a bit better. |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
Just going for a cut-up breakbeat style .. but like I said.. im not done with it yet |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
I downloaded this the other day lol and I just spent the last 30 mins downloading it again. Yeah you have good loops, they are blended to an extent but not enough like the others said. I like the track so keep on working on it. |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
will do.. I think you dark bastards are the ones that would really dig this track.. 90% of my tracks are dark. :p |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
really really liked it but it does need direction i'd swear the standard of tunes on this board is getting much higher |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
i liked it - this track has much potential. lots of noisefuckery and knob twiddling, but i think i agree with horsefactory that it does need some cohesion. it needs an element to bring it all together, something to drive it. i think some more dominant melody would help quite a bit as well. however, i do enjoy it, though i think, from the quality of its constructions so far, that you could take it further. |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
I'd hate to hear your worst one. |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
oddio.. yes definitely agreed. I'm in the process now trying to incorporate more of the melody.. thinking of doing a huge melody break/build right after the acid section.. you read my mind. Thanks for the comments guys, keep em comin! |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
all you need is a big perfect melody |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
ok. I didn't mind the progression. Your production is good. And you have a few good sounds. Oh and your rythms are good. Non-cheesy melodies. Thats the pro's... stuff you should work on... The flow. Although i thought the progression was good, it sounds too inorganic and too programmed. Its too easy to figure out what it is your are doing to create the track. Hence some of the "you have nice loops but they just go from one loop to the next" reponses. Seeing as you do/like 'dark' music, perhaps you'd be interested in my latest creation? |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
i listened ... and i agree with most of the above comments ... sorry i couldnt be of more help .... it needs to be faster , who knows man my music sucks so i cant rag on other peeps ,,, keep at it man |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
its all good man.. i make music because i want to hear what i like not what everyone else likes.. i think thats the direction most musicians should go with it as selfish as it may seem. Its important to keep it a personal passion and not a competition.. keep em comin yal, im workin on it as we speak. |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
yeah thats pretty much what i do , make shit that sounds good to me ... i just posted a track i finished , and i doubt any one else could like something like that but me ..... still i put it online for fun ... check it out if you want i just posted the thread |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
| |||||||||
|
|
I worked the melody in a little bit but its tough with the high density beats.. I'll have a new file to d/l shortly. |
||||||||
|
|
|||||||||
|
Messageboard index
|
|||||||||
