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well - is the first full track i have written for few weeks - and im really enjoying it, i just finished it less then 20 minutes ago. its the first song from a band project i am starting with a Flutist/Female Vocalist, a Violinist, a Guitarist, and a Keyboard/Trumpet player (ill be writing, and playing bass) if anyone that is online right now has a listen id be very grateful. :) |
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Check your link. It doesnt work properly |
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it works for me - try copying it and adding it as a location to your winamp playlist. |
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No Access You are trying to access a ZeBOX file from another site. Please try accessing the file again directly from: http://zebox.com. |
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well then. its called "r ivancic - afternoons by riversides" |
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The first link worked just fine for me - downloading now using my state of the art 28.8K modem |
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it sounds very correct.. very POPish at first wich im not too in love with, towards the end i really start to like it, the strings and the flute is very nice, a bit RPG gameish and a bit Chineesish =D i think the bass and guitars could be a bit paned.. maybe some chorus on the guitar and hmm dunno something to make the bass sound fater. overall the song is nice, it works well |
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i wrote it to be played by actual people on actual instruments, so i didnt do anything production wise on this mp3 but thanks for listening (btw, its in a C# Major pentatonic with the flute part working around an F Minor pentatonic, which is probably what you are thinking is the "chinese" sound) |
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=) sry if i sounded negative, it sounded well written! chinese sound =D yeah, well im currently learning about notes chords harmony and so on.. have not learned it all inside out yet but it's coming. good day! |
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Very nice, Ronnie; I look forward to hearing an mp3 of it "live" - I trust that is on the cards? btw - are you sure that the pentatonic has major and minor? I'm sure it is C# Pentatonic rather than C# Major Pentatonic :) |
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well - i referred to it as a C# Major Pent. because it has a third spaced 4 semitones away from the first - unlike a minor which has the flatted third and flatted fifth which are present when you use the same notes starting at the F (the third in the C# pentatonic) for the first of the pentatonic F minor so the C#m Pent is: C# D# F G# A# and the F(M) Pent is F G# A# C# D# but you probably already know that and can educate me about some more stuff. |
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Nope, I wasn't aware there were major and minor versions of the Pentatonic scale! :) |
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well - a pentatonic scale is usually when you just take a normal scale and remove certain notes - the most common minor pent removes the second, the sixth - and the most common major pent removes the fourth and the seventh. the fact that they are usually arranged like that allows you to use a minor and major pentatonic together where the major is the base and the minor's first is on the major's third. this adds a wonderful dimension to the piece and gives the minor melody real emotion when contrasted with the major harmonies. |
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Umm I have to say I don't really like this kind of music. Although if I did like this kind of music, then I would like this track, as it's very well composed and overall very nice! |
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yeah, the first link worked for me too. just right click and "Save as" if you're on IE. This is excellent, Cort. Such wonderful melody. I actually welcome the absence of drums. But well developed melody. This band already sounds promising. |
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atm it sound harsh because its computerized but having said that it would be very good with vocal and played by actual ppl |
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thanks for the positive comments guys. i hope to record the performance(s) the band does, so you will all get to see how things turn out. |
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hooray! if any of them sound merely half as good as this, i'll buy your first album. |
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damn it people! this is fucking great stuff, download it for your own good. |
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heheh - thanks for the kind words. and we'll see what happens with an album, my grandpa is good friends with a guy who runs a high-end professional recording studio so my chances of producing something that sounds top-notch are pretty high. |
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song that i just wrote. this one is a blues-ish song which sounds very dark. in the actual live version, the second and fourth verses will be accompanied by the female vocalists telling a bone-chilling story of a soldier who dies on juno beach. also, the last portion of the song which has the stop-time chords and the rhythm bass will have an electric guitar solo. |
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I LIKED IT, RON. I PREFERRED THE FIRST ONE.. STILL, I WANT TO HEAR THEM BOTH RECORDED LIVE! |
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Troll. |
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martini. |
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Hi, I hated it. Sorry...it's just not my sort of thing...actually bits of it are..but most of it isn't. I love you cort. |
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Hi, I have reconsidered my position regarding my opinion of the aforementioned track. I have now decided it is a rather pleasent RPG style romp. It would be a highly enjoyable listen with a glass of wine and some friends around a roaring fire accompanied by crack cocaine. |
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i would definately like to hear these with vocals and real instruments! nice melodies. |
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