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cubase sx sequenced nord rack 2 melody percussion samples from the www.audiobulb.com CREATE page library |
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well. it took it's time to get anywhere...which was...still really kindof not anywhere. i don't mean that in a mean way...i mean like...i just expected/wanted it to "pick up", but it never did. it was just kindof samey all throughout and kindof boring. sorry. =/ |
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Everything sounds clean. I like that. Doesn't have enough variation to justify it's 5:26 length, but that's my opinion. I'd also like to add that I think you have a good name and I like your avatar. |
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yes, it was very clean, though. that was good. yes. |
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where did you make it? |
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made it in my home studio - sheffield! too long - mmm - other people have mentioned the ambient/glitch start is too long - that would be easy to cut down and start the track near the first melodic chord.... everyone is in such a rush these days! thanks for the feedback - i'll look at doing an edit anyone else with opinions on this track? |
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an edit can be found here |
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Very boring...sorry didnt like it. |
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this makes me think of black dog (there's even a sample in there that sounds like a sample from spanners), in a way (outtake from spanners?), but it needs a tighter arrangement that makes the development more explicit. it feels like it meanders now, i think, but there's a much better track in there with a stronger arrangement (or maybe an additional, subtle counter melody). overall, i liked it very much. i listened four or five times, and each time i appreciated it more. i listened to the edited version. relative to the total music output of xltronic members, this is certainly well above average and, i think, underappreciated. |
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Will give it a listen later, right now cleaning this damn place until my landlord gets here in 4 hours... *sigh* |
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you mean you don't listen to music while you clean?!?! that's the best part of cleaning! |
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I wish, my mp3 player got stolen |
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coitus interruptus! at least you know what you want for christmas now. |
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Thanks plaidz you make some very good points there so an even smaller track - more to the point and a development in melody - as it stands it is quite minimal with just chords in succession - but i could bring in a slower progressive pad playing against these would gell it but might hide some of the rhythmic intricacies but worth a go thanks |
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some of those intricacies could probably stand a little more foreground presence. the track doesn't necessarily need to be smaller. in fact, after listening five times i appreciated the arrangement more. but i do think adding some drama in a counter melody and building to a more solid climax would help out. of course the most important advice is to be wary of advice... |
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i take what also makes sense to me :) |
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I've always liked room tracks! I will listen in a bit! |
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mmm.. didn't really do it for me. kinda booring after a while. some neat sounds. but not anything going on to really focus on. i found myself not paying attention to it after a few minutes while just poking around the internet. i think this is the kind of track that belongs as the last track on an album. like after the last track, the cd keeps going for a while then like 5 minutes after its done, this song kicks in. well, not really "kicks" as much as "sneaks" in. |
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i just think it needs some more low end. |
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because i like your name as it is, and your av going with it lots too, i've downloaded in 24:24 minutes and am now gonna log off and snuggle up in bed and listen :) |
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darn i wanted you to say room |
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It sounds like a Radiohead IDM track to me. |
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a radiohead idm track? like the one with the computer voice? that is the only one i know of theirs.... not my cup of tea usually.... |
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No...like their efforts on Kid A etc. Not bad but kind of lacking. |
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It's not bad, it could do with a bit more body to the sound (maybe a little bit of reverb?) though and the edit version is compressed a bit too heavily- it's the sort of track that sounds better when it's a bit more quiet. |
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