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dub
from Italy on 2003-12-11 14:39 [#00987140]
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if you want:
http://www.mindseye.it/mp3/touch_the_ground.mp3
any comments r welcome
peace.
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2003-12-11 15:26 [#00987245]
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this doesn't do much for me.
it seems quite derivative.
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2003-12-11 15:42 [#00987258]
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it's not bad at all, it has potential. there's some interesting stuff going on with the drums. it could be better, yes, but it's not by any means hopeless! it doesn't really do anything for me, it's a bit flat-sounding and predictable. but keep working at it!
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dariusgriffin
from cool on 2003-12-11 15:53 [#00987271]
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I think it's quite good. It doesn't really go anywhere, but it's nice enough. Maybe you should edit it down a bit, yes, but yes, yes, I like it, yes. I'd consider saving it on my own personal hard-drive if you made a proper link.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-11 15:57 [#00987279]
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Shit and I thought I was the only one who got hammered.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-11 15:58 [#00987281]
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dub,
You need a faster server this track is taking an age to download.
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Anus_Presley
on 2003-12-11 15:59 [#00987285]
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I don't. End.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-11 16:07 [#00987299]
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I quite like the feel of this track I have to admit. From the other comments I was feeling that it was gonna be poor. I wish it would develop a bit more musically though. I like the notes you're using though and the beat is pretty funky. For me you need to repeat the 16 bars of notes your using right through out the track. This has certainly got potentially. Your beat programming is pretty wicked, certainly be interested to hear more trax from you. I think with more notation and enhancement this would be a pretty ace track.
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Anus_Presley
on 2003-12-11 16:11 [#00987302]
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But you have to say that now that yourr trracks arre up forr a bashing.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-11 16:25 [#00987315]
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Do I? I'm always pretty positive about most people's trax. Have always been. The melody is strong, the beats are good and my comments are genuine. My comments stand as is. If he enhances the melody and builds on it and brings in some variation etc etc; it'll change the trax instantly. He has a strong set of notes to work with already which is so important. If a trax has notes that don't hit me then it does make listening to a trax hard. Good selection of notes are first and foremost what I appreciate and look for in a track.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-11 16:30 [#00987318]
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Anus_Presley,
Look let people say what they wanna say. Fact is I would prefer peeps to be 100% genuine about my trax. If they aren't then I just simply delude myself. I of course like what I do otherwise I would produce it but you ask others and you take on board what they have to say and then you either reject it or accept it.
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evolume
from seattle (United States) on 2003-12-11 17:09 [#00987372]
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made a linky for ya
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dariusgriffin
from cool on 2003-12-11 17:13 [#00987380]
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I THANCK U
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dub
from Italy on 2003-12-11 17:16 [#00987388]
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thanks evolume..
and thanks to all for listening and comments..
i'm working on some tight stuff i'd like to post here..
my website has a promo section anyway..
cheers
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evolume
from seattle (United States) on 2003-12-11 17:22 [#00987397]
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hey, i quite like it. it has a lot of nice "parts" or "movements."
that sample at 2min fits very nicely.
the bass line is rich and rubbery.
my only criticizm is that maybe it goes on about a minute too long. and the little silly ending microwave ding sound kinda sabotages the sincerity of the song. eh.. if that makes sense... like uh.. the track itself is not silly, so putting a silly ending kinda deflates the uh.. like.. hmm.. well .. uh.. ya know?
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dub
from Italy on 2003-12-12 08:09 [#00988020]
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i agree with u with final sample but i liked it... it's a kind of a break..
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