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hello everyone, hopefully some of you have seen me around in the past. well i'm here to say please view my new comic, it will be updated every few days. inspired by: white ninja, achewood, toothpaste for dinner, natalie dee, return to sender |
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lol, i liked 'poop' and 'leaves'. very funny :) |
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thanks! i know there are a million other comics out there, but i figured why not. and this being a great community would be the perfect place to start. har har. |
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not the best... sorry, its just not my humour |
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thats cool, thanks for looking at least! |
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oh come on! you must find poop funny !? |
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bumper sticker |
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best comic artist ever? Robert Crumb. period. |
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robert crumb's drawings are all dirty-like. |
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it's no pearls before swine, but it's not awful you're more creative than i am anyway, if that means anything |
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life in hell is by far the best comics out there |
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it is good, yes. :) Akbar and Jeff.. ha ha.. |
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i'm only trying to get it out there, so don't kill me (yet). it will get better, i promise. |
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I found some of the humour to be very clever...especially those relating to the dynamics and space of the panels (bored, compactor)....my biggest problem was with the rendering..maybe using a finer point would free up some more space as well as enable you to add just a few more details in the panels....because right now it is a bit hard tell what's what... yeah I am with with qrter on the Akbar and Jeff comparison....and that's quite high praise indeed... |
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LIFE IN HELL !!! :D |
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um...Akbar and Jeff is like a subset of LIFE in HELL... |
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my friend had a life in hell book, that was good stuff. |
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dump |
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i don't really like a single bit about it. keep trying, though. |
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yeah i din't enjoy it either |
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I like the more nonsensical ones a lot, like Beehive Backpack. All the ones I read are pretty cool, I like your drawing style too. Most pointless comments ever, but whatever. |
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i thought some of them were quite good, i like the drawing style too. I think you need to make the dialogue a little more legible, and maybe use a thinner line to draw. :) |
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yes thank you. another mump. |
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I dont get it. |
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thanks! |
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but im pretty sure it sucks. |
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cool! i'm glad you've voiced your opinion. |
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dump |
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i like your graphic style! =) for the stories, it depends, some are funny, some are... nothing. but that's the same with all webcomics, or almost. (just more or less...) |
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thank you...and they're not all supposed to be funny...i feel that they should just exist, like the characters have their own life as eveyone else has their own, and their lives are humorous at times. others not so, rather just...being. |
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dude ! ...can we get daily comic mail ? ;) "love your stuff" |
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forck_02lynix > i know that feeling... when you're attached to your characters... i have this too =) (sometimes i feel like the authors killing their own characters are cold-hearted...) |
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first poit! painting is available to view. also, prints are available cheap if anyone is interested. |
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funny characters : ))) |
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Not very funny. But I don't like white ninja either... |
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the only one i like so far is beck |
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thas cool. new comic is called ass coffee. |
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Yeah, i'm not laughing one bit. My taste in humour (and a lot others) is more for unpredictable, outrageous, witty brand. Although, i thought 'tee hee' when I read "dinner III" I never actually laughed physically. |
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dwnq |
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hmm i guess i don't get it. but i only read 2 of em. |
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the art is kina cute though. maybe you just need to illustrate somebody else's stories or something. those pointy nose guys would work well in children's books i think. |
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thanks. perhaps, my stories are a bit weak i'll admit. right now i'm trying to do different things with the drawings, as you might have seen i've been getting away from doing the strips. not so sure where i want to go with it. |
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Ok, some constructive critisism from here (im trying to do this myself you see). The drawings are ok in themselves, very cute and likeable, but try to avoid that "talking heads" syndrome (every panel is basicly the same, and the humour must carry the strip). i think great comics must vary a little from pic to pic. Calvin & Hobbes, like it or not, is a great example of how to achieve this. Appart from being very well written, the great drawings really add to the comedy (in calvin & hobbes). Also, you are in your strips fixed to do like 6 pictures, but experiment more with that, it looks to samey. The humor, i dont really get it like many on the board, but i really think it has potential, that sort of both cute and strange. but you know, agree with yourself what you want to do, and just try hard. Post your new stuff sometime, i want to see it. Hope this helps! |
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DirtyPriest: thanks for the insight. i'm going to go look at all my old calvin & hobbes books when i get home now. i know what you mean - things need to vary to stay interesting. will bump this again when new stuff is pleasing me. qrter: thanks! that was a funny day. i really got all jittery cuz i don't usually drink caffeine. |
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I agree with DirtyPriest about the talking heads - you need to make the art speak more, thats what is most interesting. it might be a good idea to work some kind of story arcs into your comic, so it becomes more linear etc. |
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thats a good idea too. achewood style. |
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it seems like it's trying too hard to be random for the sake of randomness. which i don't really find funny. if it's random and meaningless all the time it looses it's impact. randomness is only funny to me when it's surrounded with logical events. but i really admire your ability to take constructive criticism about it. keep it up. |
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i really like NO CELL |
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