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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 03:03 [#00958047]
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i wrote a clever piece of impotently short fiction you can find here
the title is indeed Tree Porn. i'd love to read the thoughts of the people on this board.
i'll bump some time when more fluently english are on.
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Jarworski
from The Grove (United Kingdom) on 2003-11-20 03:09 [#00958052]
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I didn't like it but hey, so what.
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 03:10 [#00958053]
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but now i must know why you didn't like it.
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2003-11-20 03:11 [#00958054]
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More Fluently English? Those who speak English more fluently?
Or Do you mean Flatulantly English?
Yes the English do eat a lot of curries.
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Chri5py
from my Solarbear (United Kingdom) on 2003-11-20 03:14 [#00958059]
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I don't like currie
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 03:16 [#00958061]
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hey it's gogo.
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Jedi Chris
on 2003-11-20 03:18 [#00958064]
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I quite liked it. Although the ending was a surprise to me, I didn't suspect the man would come from behind the tree. I thought it was more 'Lord of the Rings' talking tree type things :D
Very good....nice photo as well, did you take it?
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Chri5py
from my Solarbear (United Kingdom) on 2003-11-20 03:19 [#00958066]
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Ents you silly old man.
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AK47
on 2003-11-20 03:23 [#00958070]
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I didn't find it too taxing on my english comprehension abilities...but I liked the photo
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 03:24 [#00958071]
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you'd like that wouldn't you >:O
thanks for reading. someone else took the photo, whom the character is loosely based on.
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 03:25 [#00958073]
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man now you lot have me feeling like a condescending bastard.
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Jedi Chris
on 2003-11-20 03:27 [#00958076]
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Ents to you with knobs on, Captain Sassy Pants!
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purgruv
from Accrington (UK) - 52nd State (United States Minor Outlying Islands) on 2003-11-20 03:27 [#00958077]
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the ending proves that everyone thinks about porn, like me...
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Chri5py
from my Solarbear (United Kingdom) on 2003-11-20 03:29 [#00958079]
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Oh, go and sit in a clog!
(Prime: I like it....)
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 03:30 [#00958081]
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homeless people really like their porn.
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purgruv
from Accrington (UK) - 52nd State (United States Minor Outlying Islands) on 2003-11-20 03:32 [#00958086]
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i like homeless people who like porn
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 03:32 [#00958088]
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thanks, but those 4 dots tell me you're hiding something.
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Jedi Chris
on 2003-11-20 03:32 [#00958090]
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Is that some fetish of yours?
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 03:33 [#00958092]
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well now you know where all of that supposed booze money you give them is going.
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Chri5py
from my Solarbear (United Kingdom) on 2003-11-20 03:34 [#00958094]
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no... I like dots.
who's in your avatar?
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 03:37 [#00958099]
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normally i say a bunch of waffles, but it's actually from a scan from some japanese magazine i found somewhere online. i honestly don't know who it is. sorry.
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purgruv
from Accrington (UK) - 52nd State (United States Minor Outlying Islands) on 2003-11-20 03:37 [#00958100]
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i just like the idea that homeless can wack their jizz over super models, make for a decent jam film!!!
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 03:42 [#00958104]
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it's not like the really old ones are in enough shape to get their rape on.
(if that offended the 3 females on this board i apologize)
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purgruv
from Accrington (UK) - 52nd State (United States Minor Outlying Islands) on 2003-11-20 03:44 [#00958108]
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it's possible that bums get their hole in some funny old ways, possibly frivolous n jerky
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anon
from ^_^ (United Kingdom) on 2003-11-20 04:21 [#00958152]
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I like your story very very much :)
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 04:25 [#00958160]
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:D
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godataloss
from Cleveland (United States) on 2003-11-20 10:57 [#00958454]
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Crap -alliteration is the last bastion of a helpless writer.
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roygbivcore
from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2003-11-20 11:28 [#00958481]
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well great
jedichrisruinedtheendingforme
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Jedi Chris
on 2003-11-20 12:39 [#00958589]
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:'(
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Dozier
from United States on 2003-11-20 13:23 [#00958668]
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i liked it. good little piece.
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optimus prime
on 2003-11-20 18:26 [#00959010]
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could somebody please teach me how to write properly?
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