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A new beautiful track by Archie! :)
 

offline Archrival on 2003-11-16 05:44 [#00951916]
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Check it out and give me some comments :) thanks-

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/archrivalmusic.htm


 

offline Archrival on 2003-11-16 05:45 [#00951919]
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the name of the track sucks.....

help me with a good name of the track :)

uhm the track have the awful name "Sumfing Wunderful" right
now, help me with a better name after u listen to it.

yup


 

offline Ceri JC from Jefferson City (United States) on 2003-11-16 05:56 [#00951921]
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Trying to DL the mp3 I get:

"Please be patient!

This download hasn't been cleared yet. Please check back
tomorrow.

SoundClick home"

I can stream it though. Not a bad track at all. I like the
(synth?) piano part to it the best.


 

offline nobsmuggler from silly mid-off on 2003-11-16 05:58 [#00951923]
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good track but i can hear everything some of the synth/pc
sounds need to be softer or have the edges faded for the
type of track it is imo

and the name of the track how about Gaps in trees


 

offline Archrival on 2003-11-16 05:59 [#00951924]
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thanx for listening to my track :)

what about the Trizznack Three track? U like that too?

do u have a better name for it Ceri?


 

offline Archrival on 2003-11-16 06:00 [#00951926]
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NICE NAME!!! :) and thanx for the constructive critic :)
"synth/pc
sounds need to be softer or have the edges faded for the
type of track it is imo" no doubt.

Ceri I think u can download it later this evening...


 

offline Archrival on 2003-11-16 06:02 [#00951928]
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ok now I changed the name to "Gaps In Trees". ;)


 

offline rudster from the glasgow on 2003-11-16 07:22 [#00951984]
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Really enjoyed this track.

Really good solid tight mix, the piano riff is excellent.

The baby sample is really effective too

Great track mate

www.mp3.com.au/rud for mine cheers


 

offline Ceri JC from Jefferson City (United States) on 2003-11-16 07:35 [#00951997]
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I think I prefered Trizznack 3 to Gaps in the Trees, I
particularly liked the plane flying by at the start (good
use of panning) and the dockyard fog bell also used near the
start the melody also makes me think of a dock covered in
mist. For this reason I'd suggest the track name
"Docklands".

NB: I find it Hard to comment on streamed files rather than
mp3s as I can't skip about and repeat bits I'm not sure
about etc. :)

Why don't you have a listen to this new track of mine I think you'll
like...


 

offline Archrival on 2003-11-16 08:22 [#00952017]
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Ceri: Nice name, I changed it to Docklands :)

Siberia altai mix: Excellent track, I like it, u know that I
like strong tunes with a strong melody.

Rudster: Beautiful dark electronica, kinda like old vintage
AE a la Amber. I really like it.



 

offline Ceri JC from Jefferson City (United States) on 2003-11-16 08:33 [#00952022]
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Sooo... about all those SAW 1 style tracks you promised us
about 6 months back....? ;)


 

offline Archrival on 2003-11-16 08:38 [#00952023]
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yeah I can post a few on soundclick, I like it, its easy to
use and its fast.

Didnt really like mp3.com or Zebox.

Ill post a new track later this evening...


 

offline weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-11-16 09:15 [#00952045]
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sumfingawful - nice track! Reminds me of BOC and something
else. Very lush.

the only thing i would have done different is lower the
crying baby sample and give the main piano melody a bit more
variation. Otherwise this is a great track with lots of
background juicyness and sounds.


 

offline Archrival on 2003-11-16 10:48 [#00952088]
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I actually thought about that too, the baby is too loud!!!

And a little change in the main piano would not hurt the
track :)

thanx for the response wheateredsteoner!


 

offline Archrival on 2003-11-16 11:26 [#00952115]
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"Sooo... about all those SAW 1 style tracks you promised us

about 6 months back....? ;)"

yeah, but when I think about it, what is a saw 1 style
track???

Is it a ambient track like "I" or "Tha" or is it a techno
track like "Pulsewidth" or is it a trip hop track like
"Xtal" or is it a track like Heliosphan???? U get my point
:)

I dont know what I claimed with that statement about a lot
of saw 1 type tracks, so I take that back....BUT I will post
a lot of old n new tracks, remixes, mixes etc etc

peace


 

offline plaidzebra from so long, xlt on 2003-11-17 13:01 [#00953807]
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i thought these two tracks were very good. if they reminded
me of any established artists, i'd say older plaid.

i agree about "trees": the baby sample needs to be quiter
and the repeating piano motif, while appealing, needs more
variation.

in "docks," i think the solo oboe notes sound too much like
prepared samples; too simple, uninflected, expressionless.
while i like the track, it would also benefit from more
elaboration and seems to end unresolved.

although i think they do work in these tracks, samples of
children crying/laughing and jet engines whooshing past are
clichés.


 


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