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offline rF from __e____e_________e______q_____ (Australia) on 2003-10-20 21:34 [#00911408]
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its probably my cleanest sounding track ever..
endt

not a lot of complexity, mainly a melodic track.. but i
spent ages on the sounds..


 

offline Key_Secret from Sverige (Sweden) on 2003-10-20 21:48 [#00911409]
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hello my friend.

Nice little track. Kinda funky.
And yes it did sound clean (but I'm not sure I've heard your
earlier tracks so I can't compare).
It wasn't very complex, but you had enough layers to keep
the track from becoming boring.
The drums reminds of me some of the windowlickerbeats. There
are probably drums used in some other track that are more
similar, but that is which track I thought of (when they
started in the track).
The only thing that could improve the track is more
"complex" drums.
They wouldn't harm, only do good. Not all through the track,
but here and there.
Can spice up things (especially when the track has this
speed, it would work fine).
Overall : nice track, good work.
I like it.
I didn't get the title though.

 

offline Key_Secret from Sverige (Sweden) on 2003-10-20 21:49 [#00911410]
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also : the outro is a bit too long.

 

offline wimp on 2003-10-20 22:45 [#00911445]
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Complex drums? Sheesh.

Good song, dude. I like the metallic paranoid atmosphere.

Does "commenting" mean that I can point out what I find as
"errors" in your songwriting. In that case, allow me: add a
fat bass line that goes C then E then a sustained G, speed
everything up to 162bpm, throw in some claps followed by
backwards claps, and some stuttery skippy chopped up B.I.G.,
play 30 seconds of the song backwards when it hits 1:35sec,
then add some waspy Bloodhound Gang melody at the end. Hell,
why even bother writing the song, I'll do it myself! But
seriously it could use some moe "complex" drums.


 

offline rockenjohnny from champagne socialism (Australia) on 2003-10-20 23:17 [#00911455]
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ok

#1 you ripped off my song title :]

#2 yeah ive also checked fourside, i thought that started
out all ambitious, and ended perfectly.. i think the
shifting of the something fit in phrase along with the
harmonies is excellent..

#3 endt kicked in for me at about 2 minutes when the hi hats
get scratched.. and id like to hear more voices :D that
really added something i think! pretty safe choice for track
1


 

offline rF from __e____e_________e______q_____ (Australia) on 2003-10-21 01:54 [#00911532]
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thanks for the review, key_secret!

wimp: ahah hmm.. thanks?

john: ripped off how? oh wait you have a track called bendt
or something yeah heh..

voices? eheh nah that was just a normal lead line put
through a formant filter.. ok well its called syng or
soemthing like that hehe,./


 

offline rockenjohnny from champagne socialism (Australia) on 2003-10-21 01:58 [#00911537]
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oh is that right? had me fooled :]


 

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