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purlieu
from Leeds (United Kingdom) on 2003-10-16 07:21 [#00904072]
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Struxsture by myself. It's an IDM sort of thing, which gets weirder and more chaotic as it goes on. More than a little bit inspired by Confield and Draft (but probably not as good ;))
Feedback is welcomed muchly. :)
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Skink
from A cesspool in eden on 2003-10-16 07:23 [#00904074]
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Downloading.
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Skink
from A cesspool in eden on 2003-10-16 07:29 [#00904077]
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Listening.
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Skink
from A cesspool in eden on 2003-10-16 07:34 [#00904080]
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Hmmm ok, I thought that there really isn't enough there, you know like i think you needed to place more stuff in the background it's kinda like an unfinished demo or that's how it sounds to me i also think the drums need alot more work.
But as a starting point i think this has potential to be great great it just sounds too empty and it really needs filling out.
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purlieu
from Leeds (United Kingdom) on 2003-10-16 07:37 [#00904081]
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More work? I spent about three weeks on those drums. :P Mm, I know what you mean about it needing more. I was quite happy with its simplicity, though. Eh, I dunno. Maybe I'll add something else. Can't think what'd go in there, though.
Thanks for the feedback. :)
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Skink
from A cesspool in eden on 2003-10-16 07:39 [#00904085]
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I didn't mean to make it sound as if i'm dismissing your work but i just wanted to give you an honest answer and i think that it would be a great track if you just added a little more.
: )
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purlieu
from Leeds (United Kingdom) on 2003-10-16 07:42 [#00904090]
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No, no, that's fine. I appreciate your honesty. :) As I say, I'll see what else I can add. I'm happy with the drums myself, but I might be able put some other synthy type stuff in there.
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-10-16 07:49 [#00904098]
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dowloading =D
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-10-16 07:57 [#00904106]
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listening
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-10-16 08:05 [#00904111]
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hmmmz, well it sounds good overall
hmmmmmmmm
as teh drums get "more and more" could be done in anotehr way i think, i think it would be better if u added more interesting new sounds instead of use the old sounds more and more, maby add some wetish fetish plaidish sounds in it.
One thing I absolutely love is when the weird organ thinggy bends, think u could bend it more often acctually, it's simply funny to listen to.
One more thing i am wating for in the last 2 mins of the songs is a wicked dark vocal, nothing serious, just soemthing =D u know just for the fuck ov IT =D
good work =D
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purlieu
from Leeds (United Kingdom) on 2003-10-16 08:09 [#00904115]
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Thanks for the words. I think I may go back and add some more stuff, if I find something to add.
I'm happy as it is, but it could well be better with more stuff. We'll see...
:)
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-10-16 08:13 [#00904117]
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it should be easy as hell to add teh wetish sounds i talked about, sometimes when u just take this small sounds and put them in the background they change the song so much for so little work, should at least make a new version of the song and spend time playing and changing the sounds of the drums as much as u can
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Gnat
from Atlanta (United States) on 2003-10-16 08:42 [#00904145]
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Listening, and I dig it. There is alot going on but it still sounds simple. I couldn't do that if I tried. When I have alot going on, it sounds like there's alot goin on, and usually too much.
I like the drums, I wouldn't change the ones you have but maybe add more percussion and variety in them.
Great tune
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purlieu
from Leeds (United Kingdom) on 2003-10-16 08:45 [#00904147]
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Thanks man. That's one thing I was trying to avoid - I didn't want it to sound too cluttered (which is why I was a little wary of adding extra stuff).
Cheers. :)
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