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Short song, please listen
 

offline MrDwatt from Helsinki (Finland) on 2003-10-12 13:15 [#00899684]
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My first real rythm song is made. It´s short and simple,
but I have worked and learnd alot on it. So please listen,
and give me some feedback.
http://koti.mbnet.fi/robix/fil/dig%20the%20pig.mp3l>


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2003-10-12 13:16 [#00899688]
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Short answer, no


 

offline MrDwatt from Helsinki (Finland) on 2003-10-12 13:17 [#00899690]
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Dig the pig



 

offline MrDwatt from Helsinki (Finland) on 2003-10-12 13:18 [#00899696]
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it ain´t big


 

offline MrDwatt from Helsinki (Finland) on 2003-10-12 13:43 [#00899719]
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well, thanks, anyway, I got to go... :~)


 

offline nobsmuggler from silly mid-off on 2003-10-12 13:51 [#00899728]
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thats good it had certain afx make-up to it

return the listen i have a thread some where on here :)


 

offline evolume from seattle (United States) on 2003-10-12 13:53 [#00899730]
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dl'ing



 

offline evolume from seattle (United States) on 2003-10-12 14:08 [#00899744]
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Well, for a first rhythm song, it is a good effort. There
isn't really that much i can say about it. I can't really
form an opinion of it. I would just say that maybe the
drums could be a little more dynamic, more variation in the
sounds or a little more tweaking in general could fix them
up. Maybe adding another melodic element could spice it up
a bit.

it's good but just a little stale.


 

offline MrDwatt from Helsinki (Finland) on 2003-10-14 05:57 [#00901523]
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yeah, I know. But how do you make the drums more dynamic?


 

offline fat kaimo from Finland on 2003-10-14 06:18 [#00901545]
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by making different hits different volume(&/tone), right?


 

offline Gnat from Atlanta (United States) on 2003-10-14 06:28 [#00901554]
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I like it, it has a nice tone. Like evolume said, maybe it
needs another melodic element. I was looking for something
with a higher frequency when listening to it. But it sounds
good, and has nice movement.

check out my thread floating around for a listen ;)


 

offline pOgO from behind your belly button fluff on 2003-10-14 06:38 [#00901558]
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ooo, me likes

It remonds me a bit of Roni Size atthe begning


 

offline MrDwatt from Helsinki (Finland) on 2003-10-15 14:26 [#00903251]
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thanks, I will remember that about differrent volumes! I
already done it, a bit, but maybe it´s a key to a fuller
sound...


 

offline Oddioblender from Fort Worth, TX (United States) on 2003-10-15 14:32 [#00903254]
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downloading - phone connection.....

by the way, here's MINE.


 

offline Oddioblender from Fort Worth, TX (United States) on 2003-10-15 14:43 [#00903264]
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sounds pretty good - the beat is great, it's a real jam,
sorta reminds me of AFX. nice subtle melody in the second
half. good ending too. I dig it! i'd just say add a few more
layers too it, maybe a bit more texture, a few more fills in
the beat. other than that, it's quite a stone groove. solid.
:D


 

offline _awt_ from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-10-15 15:05 [#00903284]
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nice, sounds very rdj albumish and thats great, funny song.

i got an idea ! make tons of songs like this and ill dl them
all =D


 

offline MrDwatt from Helsinki (Finland) on 2003-10-16 12:37 [#00904501]
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I actually thought more of some other dnb than afx this
time, but ofcourse the snare fills are from afx...


 

offline ecnadniarb on 2003-10-16 12:47 [#00904510]
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It was a decent enough track, pretty good in parts...I think
it lacked drive and energy though...get more of a spark into
it and it would be a very good track.


 


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