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My first real rythm song is made. It´s short and simple, but I have worked and learnd alot on it. So please listen, and give me some feedback. |
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Short answer, no |
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it ain´t big |
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well, thanks, anyway, I got to go... :~) |
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thats good it had certain afx make-up to it return the listen i have a thread some where on here :) |
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dl'ing |
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Well, for a first rhythm song, it is a good effort. There isn't really that much i can say about it. I can't really form an opinion of it. I would just say that maybe the drums could be a little more dynamic, more variation in the sounds or a little more tweaking in general could fix them up. Maybe adding another melodic element could spice it up a bit. it's good but just a little stale. |
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yeah, I know. But how do you make the drums more dynamic? |
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by making different hits different volume(&/tone), right? |
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I like it, it has a nice tone. Like evolume said, maybe it needs another melodic element. I was looking for something with a higher frequency when listening to it. But it sounds good, and has nice movement. check out my thread floating around for a listen ;) |
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ooo, me likes It remonds me a bit of Roni Size atthe begning |
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thanks, I will remember that about differrent volumes! I already done it, a bit, but maybe it´s a key to a fuller sound... |
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downloading - phone connection..... by the way, here's |
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sounds pretty good - the beat is great, it's a real jam, sorta reminds me of AFX. nice subtle melody in the second half. good ending too. I dig it! i'd just say add a few more layers too it, maybe a bit more texture, a few more fills in the beat. other than that, it's quite a stone groove. solid. :D |
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nice, sounds very rdj albumish and thats great, funny song. i got an idea ! make tons of songs like this and ill dl them all =D |
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I actually thought more of some other dnb than afx this time, but ofcourse the snare fills are from afx... |
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It was a decent enough track, pretty good in parts...I think it lacked drive and energy though...get more of a spark into it and it would be a very good track. |
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