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offline flim nanou from out of the frying pan (United States) on 2003-08-08 23:33 [#00815194]
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that I wrote. it's not bitter and it's not about you, or
anyone you know

I cut myself.
I cut myself out of the picture of me and you.

I chewed on my eraser for awhile
before I used it twice and twice to smash your spine
and twice to split you open.
One two and two and through and through the vorpal blade.
It still wasn't enough.

You cute leaning shouldersmirking.
I shout LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR.

I broke the frame and my fingers bled.
I broke the frame and my fingers are still bleeding.



 

offline roygbivcore from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2003-08-08 23:41 [#00815205]
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once i read a poem about a girl cutting her self

yours is better


 

offline flim nanou from out of the frying pan (United States) on 2003-08-08 23:42 [#00815209]
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thanks nigel. you're my favorite.


 

offline ambsace from canaDUH. on 2003-08-09 00:21 [#00815215]
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jabberwocky, eh? quite nice. ;]


 

offline Duble0Syx from Columbus, OH (United States) on 2003-08-09 00:46 [#00815219]
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Not sure if I agree with the "not bitter" part. I want to
read some depressing poetry, like edgar allen poe.


 

offline Refund from Melbourne (Australia) on 2003-08-09 00:55 [#00815220]
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those word convey some harsh images


 

offline childkiller from santiago (Chile) on 2003-08-09 01:30 [#00815230]
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....my god, i wanted to post something funny in here, but
Cabbog`s death really affected me. i`m off to bed. nanight
y`all


 

offline Refund from Melbourne (Australia) on 2003-08-09 01:37 [#00815237]
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sleep well


 

offline ambsace from canaDUH. on 2003-08-09 03:52 [#00815270]
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you use ` instead of '.

subtle. that's neat. i like that.


 

offline Anus_Presley on 2003-08-09 04:27 [#00815277]
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Not bitterr. that's bitterr.


 


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