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flim nanou
from out of the frying pan (United States) on 2003-08-08 23:33 [#00815194]
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that I wrote. it's not bitter and it's not about you, or anyone you know
I cut myself. I cut myself out of the picture of me and you.
I chewed on my eraser for awhile before I used it twice and twice to smash your spine and twice to split you open. One two and two and through and through the vorpal blade. It still wasn't enough.
You cute leaning shouldersmirking. I shout LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR LIAR.
I broke the frame and my fingers bled. I broke the frame and my fingers are still bleeding.
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roygbivcore
from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2003-08-08 23:41 [#00815205]
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once i read a poem about a girl cutting her self
yours is better
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flim nanou
from out of the frying pan (United States) on 2003-08-08 23:42 [#00815209]
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thanks nigel. you're my favorite.
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ambsace
from canaDUH. on 2003-08-09 00:21 [#00815215]
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jabberwocky, eh? quite nice. ;]
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Duble0Syx
from Columbus, OH (United States) on 2003-08-09 00:46 [#00815219]
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Not sure if I agree with the "not bitter" part. I want to read some depressing poetry, like edgar allen poe.
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Refund
from Melbourne (Australia) on 2003-08-09 00:55 [#00815220]
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those word convey some harsh images
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childkiller
from santiago (Chile) on 2003-08-09 01:30 [#00815230]
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....my god, i wanted to post something funny in here, but Cabbog`s death really affected me. i`m off to bed. nanight y`all
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Refund
from Melbourne (Australia) on 2003-08-09 01:37 [#00815237]
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sleep well
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ambsace
from canaDUH. on 2003-08-09 03:52 [#00815270]
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you use ` instead of '.
subtle. that's neat. i like that.
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Anus_Presley
on 2003-08-09 04:27 [#00815277]
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Not bitterr. that's bitterr.
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