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Sanguine
from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-15 15:21 [#00780308]
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Chill, kinda glitchy, definitly more downtempo than anything else I've done
Comments appreciated, but not expected, hope you enjoy
Quiver
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virginpusher
from County Clare on 2003-07-15 15:22 [#00780313]
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*downloading
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Murray
from Southend, Essex (United Kingdom) on 2003-07-15 15:23 [#00780315]
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*downloading also
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virginpusher
from County Clare on 2003-07-15 15:34 [#00780338]
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Interesting meoldy. It starts off fairly good. I like the sound of the beats. It was definately something different.
Although it seemed that the song was lacking something. It could have been more varied in the middle and maybe towards then end. I don't want to say "repetitive" because that is a played out answer.
If you can make the middle different. Vary it up a bit more and something about the end too. I can't place it.
The length was perfect in my eyes which came as a surprise because i have a short attention span so you did a great job there.
I know this isn't the best explaination but it's all i can manage. I need a cig!
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Murray
from Southend, Essex (United Kingdom) on 2003-07-15 15:36 [#00780344]
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The begining is beautiful. I really like it. The beats at times were a bit too analog based. Perhaps throw in an altered snare sound in there.
I agree with pusher, it gets a bit samey. But if you chnaged the middle a tiny bit and also the end a tiny bit then you;ve got a killer track on your hands. Its pretty amazing at the moment.
the start is the best. What software did you use?
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Sanguine
from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-15 15:37 [#00780347]
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Still fooling with it, the middle does need a little pick up... thanks for the comments!
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Sanguine
from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-15 15:38 [#00780348]
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Cubase SX
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aphextriplet
from your mothers bedroom (United Kingdom) on 2003-07-15 15:38 [#00780350]
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ahh i fucking love broadband
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aphextriplet
from your mothers bedroom (United Kingdom) on 2003-07-15 15:41 [#00780352]
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it sounds like some kind of fucked up fairy tale...without the fucked up part
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aphextriplet
from your mothers bedroom (United Kingdom) on 2003-07-15 15:42 [#00780354]
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its not bad, but not really something i'd listen to tbh
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Sanguine
from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-15 15:44 [#00780361]
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Yep, I understand
My other tracks have been more my own style... but I continue to experiment with stuff I wouldn't normally like until I make it the way it should be. This fits a mood I had, fucked up fairy tale is close enough to the truth
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