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         |  Zeus
             from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-13 21:50 [#00777777] Points: 14042 Status: Lurker
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 | im working on this track... not done... just wanted some advice... suggestions etc.
 
 thanks!
 
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         |  roygbivcore
             from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2003-07-13 21:52 [#00777780] Points: 22557 Status: Lurker
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 | go on, give us a snare rush 
 
 
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         |  Skink
             from A cesspool in eden on 2003-07-13 21:56 [#00777783] Points: 7483 Status: Lurker
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 | I think it could do with some more melodies and some other rythmic elements, I like where it's heading though.
 
 
 
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         |  Zeus
             from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-13 21:58 [#00777784] Points: 14042 Status: Lurker
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 | do you think I should change this rhythm up? or a seperate one?
 
 I do intened on adding more synths... counterlines etc...
 
 add variation to the long parts
 
 thanks for listening!
 
 
 
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         |  Ophecks
             from Nova Scotia (Canada) on 2003-07-13 21:59 [#00777785] Points: 19190 Status: Moderator | Show recordbag
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 | Sounds great and pretty much a full deal already, except for the bass... just sounds weak and has no punch. I like what
 the bass ''doing'' though. Everything else is thuper duper,
 I love the synths. I'm digging it.
 
 
 
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         |  Zeus
             from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-13 22:00 [#00777787] Points: 14042 Status: Lurker
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 | thanks! 
 yeah, that bass is weak...
 
 i tried layering a subbass under it, for some power... guess
 it doesnt work too well  :-\
 
 
 
 
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         |  Skink
             from A cesspool in eden on 2003-07-13 22:02 [#00777788] Points: 7483 Status: Lurker | Followup to Zeus: #00777784
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 | I think beat wise you can't go wrong having more then one but it dosen't have to be obvious.
 
 I also think the bass is a bit weak, you should fatten it up
 a bit and add some real subtle sub bass just for emphasis.
 
 
 
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         |  Skink
             from A cesspool in eden on 2003-07-13 22:03 [#00777789] Points: 7483 Status: Lurker
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 | It's really odd that you say that! 
 
 
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         |  roygbivcore
             from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2003-07-13 22:06 [#00777791] Points: 22557 Status: Lurker
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 | snare rush! snare rush! snare rush! snare rush! 
 
 
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         |  w M w
             from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-07-14 10:29 [#00778338] Points: 21639 Status: Lurker
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 | Make it go like this: "AAAARRRRGHGHIIIIIIIIIIIIMMM BA BA BA BA BA BA ba BA ba BA boBOboBOboooooooooooooooM uh uh uh uh
 *snap*" That should do the trick.
 
 
 
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         |  manicminer
             from Paris (France) on 2003-07-14 10:40 [#00778358] Points: 1423 Status: Lurker
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 | How come barely anyone has responded to a very similar thread started by me (listen to THIS........!!!!) several
 hours ago?!
 
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         |  Spacecadet
             on 2003-07-14 10:44 [#00778365] Points: 1790 Status: Lurker | Followup to Zeus: #00777787
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 | just re-eq the bass 
 
 
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