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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-13 21:50 [#00777777]
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im working on this track... not done... just wanted some advice... suggestions etc.
thanks!
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roygbivcore
from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2003-07-13 21:52 [#00777780]
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go on, give us a snare rush
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Skink
from A cesspool in eden on 2003-07-13 21:56 [#00777783]
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I think it could do with some more melodies and some other rythmic elements, I like where it's heading though.
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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-13 21:58 [#00777784]
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do you think I should change this rhythm up? or a seperate one?
I do intened on adding more synths... counterlines etc...
add variation to the long parts
thanks for listening!
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Ophecks
from Nova Scotia (Canada) on 2003-07-13 21:59 [#00777785]
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Sounds great and pretty much a full deal already, except for the bass... just sounds weak and has no punch. I like what the bass ''doing'' though. Everything else is thuper duper, I love the synths. I'm digging it.
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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-07-13 22:00 [#00777787]
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thanks!
yeah, that bass is weak...
i tried layering a subbass under it, for some power... guess it doesnt work too well :-\
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Skink
from A cesspool in eden on 2003-07-13 22:02 [#00777788]
Points: 7483 Status: Lurker | Followup to Zeus: #00777784
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I think beat wise you can't go wrong having more then one but it dosen't have to be obvious.
I also think the bass is a bit weak, you should fatten it up a bit and add some real subtle sub bass just for emphasis.
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Skink
from A cesspool in eden on 2003-07-13 22:03 [#00777789]
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It's really odd that you say that!
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roygbivcore
from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2003-07-13 22:06 [#00777791]
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snare rush! snare rush! snare rush! snare rush!
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-07-14 10:29 [#00778338]
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Make it go like this: "AAAARRRRGHGHIIIIIIIIIIIIMMM BA BA BA BA BA BA ba BA ba BA boBOboBOboooooooooooooooM uh uh uh uh *snap*" That should do the trick.
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manicminer
from Paris (France) on 2003-07-14 10:40 [#00778358]
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How come barely anyone has responded to a very similar thread started by me (listen to THIS........!!!!) several hours ago?!
;)
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Spacecadet
on 2003-07-14 10:44 [#00778365]
Points: 1790 Status: Lurker | Followup to Zeus: #00777787
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just re-eq the bass
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