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If so then I have a song you might enjoy. I need feedback since its kinda a 'beta' version. Tell me what you think. |
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Listening now. |
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It's a good starting point, very sparse but i guess that'll change since it's a beta version, But i like it i'd like to hear it when it's finished. |
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Quite mellow, but I think the melody you haveused doesn't hold the track together on its own...it sounds very much like a developmental melody that will build into a much fuller sound. I am not necessarily referring to the density of the track but just the overall texture and feel... |
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well - im giving it a listen now - here's an older track i made a few months ago |
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hmmm... 2 things - your patches seemed a bit... preset - and the ending is a bit too abrupt i think if you werked on making some more organic patches (synths and whatnot) and a decent ending - it would be MUCH better - but overall - it keeps that constant mood and a structure that builds pictures in your head - so its good structurally and whatnot :) |
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thank you for your replies. corticalstim - downloading your track now. |
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nice track. Funky beat with soothing sounds. |
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agrees on the ending. But then again how can you end something? I like things to go on... kinda like a representation of life |
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Just a TAD more warm reverb on the first sound would add tons to it. Great harmonies, everything going on carries the track well, total improvement from the other two in a lot of ways. Alright... so the suggestions... the melody dries up about halfway through, fool around with it somehow, listen to the track again, see where you want to climax the piece, and make the melody work around that. Whatever changes you see fit, effects, a new riff, maybe some countermelody with another more I'd like to hear an ambient section without the drums that you develop more too, maybe at the end, and double the length of the piece. I can see a solid 8th note hi hat line coming in to increase the energy after you have some fun with the melodies. Tons of room for experimentation here... get the samples up, I want to remix it, I have some ideas. Oh, and a little jazzy track of mine you might be interested in... be prepared to chill out with the marsupials |
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I liked your jazzy tune there. Good stuff again. So you want samples eh? Which sounds in particular did you want? |
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