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I'm in the process of writing another track and I need someones opinion on this cos i'm not sure about It's called get. |
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mmokay. I like the percusive/melodic elements in the beginning - makes me think a lot of BoC though, especially when the voices drop in. nice little beat developing. like the faraway, harder percussive sounds. you do add a bit too much percussion for my taste - the drum sounds, I don't like them. the other sounds seemed on their own, the drum sounds, sound like drums (well duh). overall I think you should step away from the BoC sounds now - develop some more sounds to put in that are NOT percussive. |
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"the other sounds seemed on their own, the drum sounds, sound like drums" what I meant by this, is the drum sounds are too boring - I don't want to think 'drums' when I hear this track, I would like it to stay selfcontained. |
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I think you're right, it is very boc, i'd been listening before I wrote it. I might actually scrap it. |
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*wondering* Hmmm i'm still not sure? |
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how long have you been writing music for? |
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I've been writing since I was 13 and i've written stuff that isn't electronic as well, I must say that writing electronic stuff is much more satisfying though! |
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I'll take it that this is the end of the conversation then? *wonders again* |
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I agree with you that electrionic music is much more satisfying. I am currently trying to upload 2 more tracks to VitaminC but it is fucking around with me. I swear the service there tends to be shit! |
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Where can I hear you're stuff man? i'm interested. |
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I will provide a link later on as i am having difficulties currently. I really don't understand why it is like it is though. Probably since they updated things. * goes to check out skinks track |
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Check them both out cos curious thoughts is finished. |
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Curious Thoughts ---------------------- Seems to be a good track. I wan't sure at first but the more i listened to it the more i ended up liking it. I just think that it may be too long or my attention span is too small right now. I think if you could trim it or condense it by a minute or two then you might have something there! Good Track Get ----------------------------------- I do like the feel of this one. I like that it is slower paced and it felt like a nice contrast to the earlier track. My only suggestion is that they don't sound alive. They need more amplification or something...... i can't think of the word but they almost seem dull sounding..... not as in melody but like it was dubbed from a tape or something. ( does that make sense?) I like this track very much so though! Probably better than the first track just as a matter of personal preference. Again good job! |
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I haven't got around to mastering them yet. I'll post a different couple of tracks tomorrow, if you're interested? |
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sure! BTW (check your email) |
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O.k |
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Check yours as well. |
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some ideas are overdun The patterns are vivid, although certain layers need more time. single step melodies throughout an entire track kill me though. in essence, your ideas are muscular. |
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Which track are you talking about? |
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get was marvelous. sure it sounded BoC-ish...i dunno. but hey. what's wrong with BoC, anyways? hehe. but no...it's really very mellow. i liked it a lot. maybe just because i'm really tired and i just got home from work. eh. but no. really. it's quality stuff. if you finish it (which i think you SHOULD) let us know. i'd like to hear it. =] |
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check it out if you can. |
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i liked it much better. just seemed to be a bit repetative. quiet and easy, though. not bad. |
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hoo. what i meant was that i like the track it much better. thought 2 was what seemed a bit repetative. a little variation in the strings...or...something. i dunno. i'm sure there's a number of things you could do. it IS pleasant and relaxing, however. which is nice. why didn't i just say that the first time? =P |
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ooh. and who you turned out to be i like a lot. the little blippity-beepies. and the dooblie-doos. yeah. that thing rules. *downloads and keeps in mp3 folder titled: xltronic shtuff* |
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