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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-05-12 08:02 [#00695364]
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hi, Ive mad this pretty cute song yes..
Its not finished..
I know that the beat is simple and that the melody is not variating very much.. and that its a very short song.
Now I would like you to dl it from
http://zebox.com/awt/
and tell me.. Should I continue working on it or should i dump it ?
anyone maby wanna remix it ?
or just finish it for me ?
Or a comment of what you think of the melody would be nice..
Could you maby do this for me Pleeeaase?
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-05-12 08:56 [#00695406]
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Now youre being mean !
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2003-05-12 09:09 [#00695417]
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I'll have a look tonight if I remember.
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Morton
from out (Netherlands, The) on 2003-05-12 09:40 [#00695443]
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hey! it's a nice melody, bit cheesy though..
maybe you can make the tones of the sound the track starts with a bit longer, now it goes silent after the first note before the second one starts (..err if you know what i mean)
i must say the beat is very nice. i like really like it!! it's has something unique imo
the melody keeps on playing in my head :) i think that's a good sign too, it's pretty catchy indeed , and pretty cute yes, hehe :)
i'd say, keep no working on it, don't let others finish it, do it yourself man! i'm sure you're capable of it!! keep it up :)
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-05-12 09:44 [#00695448]
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thanks..
But hey the beat its so simple it feels wrong working with it..
Im so used to create like complex dnb tracks so when I do this Booom Dipp Boom Dippp Beats It feels so silly.
Well thank you allot for the comment !
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Morton
from out (Netherlands, The) on 2003-05-12 09:46 [#00695452]
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no sweat and about the beat, it's boom dip boom dip indeed, but there are these stretched crackely (god i have no idea how to describe these) sounds between them
i love those :)
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Morton
from out (Netherlands, The) on 2003-05-12 09:47 [#00695455]
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a little like æ's cap.iv maybe, those sounds
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-05-12 09:49 [#00695459]
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you mean the ultra fast snare rushes right =) hehe
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AphexAcid
from Sweden on 2003-05-12 10:04 [#00695478]
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I love cute songs. I'll check it out at once. ^_^
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-05-12 10:35 [#00695511]
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Ill bet youre on a modem ?
or dos it suck heh
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plaidzebra
from so long, xlt on 2003-05-12 10:58 [#00695536]
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i thought it was a very good start, you should continue working on it. reminescent of earlier bochum welt. the snare rushes are nicely done. the steady rhythm works fine, but i think there needs to be elaboration in the secondary melody line, or perhaps a third deeper bassline to underpin the melody.
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-05-12 11:00 [#00695542]
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hehe you red my mind.. I tryed to improve the bass in the second line of melody.. but that only time ive worked on the song it didnt work..
Well ill get eveything to work somehow sometime.. And now im more up to it with all the possitive critics. Thanks
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-05-12 12:28 [#00695606]
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aaaah... lets get it back on top..
=) man im buggin ya
I need more comments =)
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2003-05-12 13:40 [#00695645]
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Sounds a bit like a music box that becomes a harpsichord and then some lasery glitch beats come in. I like it, quite light hearted and upbeat. It has a delicate sound to it, as if you you played it hard it woul break.
I'd be up for remixing this if you want to mail me links of where I can DL a sample pack.
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-05-12 14:58 [#00695692]
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Cool Ceri
Well the samples are one another computer In another town right now.. But I can get them over here as soon as possible (dont know when)
Ill send this topic right back on top again when ive got the samples.
You use Flp ? in that case i could send you the flp file to. Makes thins easier right ?
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ambsace
from canaDUH. on 2003-05-12 15:23 [#00695714]
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quite pleasant. i like it. heh.
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2003-05-12 15:36 [#00695727]
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Yep, I've updated my floops to V4 so whatever version you're using is cool. Just mail me the "self contained zip" (.flp with all the samples) if it's under 2mb, otherwise we can sort something out another way.
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_awt_
from Malmö (Sweden) on 2003-05-12 15:43 [#00695734]
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v4 ? is it free ? do you haveto be a registered user ? lol
ye we work something out.. once im home to get samples.
You see Im at my girlfriends place (live here to)
And im using her for her internet connection that i dont have at home =)
But ill get them here as soon as possible and then ill get them their and then here and their and you get them there and here and Yes.
This topic will be on top again in a couple of days hopefully.
heh
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Ceri JC
from Jefferson City (United States) on 2003-05-12 15:48 [#00695742]
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No rush man, just send them whenever.
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