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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2003-05-09 07:45 [#00691128]
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I've written a short piece of music for saxophone, flute, and strings, and it would be great if you could listen and leave your thoughts on this attempt at proper composition. It's only 18 bars long
18 bar piece
thank you
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Jarworski
from The Grove (United Kingdom) on 2003-05-09 07:52 [#00691136]
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I must've been to about 18 bars this week
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2003-05-09 07:54 [#00691139]
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...and if your bad behaviour continues, you'll be BEHIND 18 bars! :P
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mylittlesister
from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2003-05-09 07:58 [#00691142]
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sounded quite nice, maybe make it have more movement towards cadence points, if u want it to be "proper" proper composition.
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ecnadniarb
on 2003-05-09 08:13 [#00691153]
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I know fuck all about composition I just know what I like the sound of. That is some cool shit...replace the sax with another sound and it sounds like an RPG soundtrack (don't take that as an insult :D )
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weatheredstoner
from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-05-09 08:28 [#00691171]
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thats a nice little tune there. ecnadniarb is right about it sounding rpg'ish, but thats always a plus in my book.
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2003-05-09 08:32 [#00691174]
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People have said that about my music before -- the irony is I've never even PLAYED an RPG game! :D
thanks guys
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Morton
from out (Netherlands, The) on 2003-05-09 09:13 [#00691218]
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i like this the alternation of major and minor make it vary between tragic and 'happy' ( <-- i'd like to choose another word there but i can't think of one), nice how you were able to put this in such a short piece
a sax isn't one of my favourite instruments and most of the time i don't consider it very suitable for pieces like this, but i couldn't tell with which instrument you should replace it in this situation, so stick with it :)
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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-05-09 09:15 [#00691224]
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omg! that must mean that all the RPG composers ripped you off!
are you goin to sue them?
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2003-05-09 09:17 [#00691226]
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I don't think you can sue for belonging to a genre.
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ambsace
from canaDUH. on 2003-05-09 09:32 [#00691252]
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i think it's the sax that makes it sound rpg-ish...hmm.
neat, though. good luck finishin' it up.=]
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2003-05-09 09:35 [#00691257]
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it's that sax soundfont - I like it for it's dynamism -- I've never particularly liked the saxophone either (apart from soprano sax), but I liked this soundfont :)
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death-pengwin
from Medicine Hat (Canada) on 2003-05-09 09:37 [#00691265]
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very cool
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2003-05-09 09:42 [#00691281]
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mm. not my thing.
mainy because of the MIDI sounds - I hate those.
the melodies don't do much for me either.
:*(
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ambsace
from canaDUH. on 2003-05-09 09:42 [#00691283]
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well, hey now. i never said i DIDN'T like the sax. i used to play alto back in high school. haha. but yes...i was just saying that it has that RPG kindof feel to it. FF4 came to mind when i listened to it. hehe.
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recycle
from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2003-05-09 09:43 [#00691289]
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grabbin all 3, will let ya know lata
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2003-05-09 09:47 [#00691295]
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funnily enough, THAT is the game that most gets compared with my stuff :D I was tempted to download its music one time to investigate myself ;)
The piece was an experiment in moving to distant keys from the tonic (C-major) The chord progression, for those interested, is:
C - A minor - G - D minor - C - C(#5th) - E minor - A minor - E-flat - E-flat minor - A-flat - A-flat minor - E - E minor - A - A minor - G - C
:)
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ambsace
from canaDUH. on 2003-05-09 09:48 [#00691300]
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eek! music theory...and...notes with names!
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recycle
from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2003-05-09 10:03 [#00691340]
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18 bar~~~~~~~~~nice but very gay fourteen~~~~~~~~~very nice dancing 10 year olds~~~~~~~~PERFECT !!
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2003-05-09 10:05 [#00691344]
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haha thad - :P dancing 10 year olds was designed to be my cult smash hit... who could resist to that opening refrain of "kill your parents" :D
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recycle
from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2003-05-09 10:23 [#00691401]
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do you still have the menstration song saved somewhere ? im gonna email your dum ass, within the next few hours.
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