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after serious consideration of publication, and having received positive comments, i hereby announce my first track ever. agenta - skellington please don't laugh at me :( |
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It's on its way :) Prolly be here in half an hour (damn modemmm) |
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Ditto. |
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I will be vicious.. ;) |
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way way way slow d/l :0( |
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oh yeah... 7k.. so its not just your modems, lads.. |
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sorry :( i have it on soulseek too for faster transfer. username neetta. message me first |
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56%.....sigh..... in a few weeks I'm on adsl. (no cable here damn, emergency solution) |
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it's really not bad at all for a first attempt! :D there are bits in it that didn't appeal to me, like the steady bass, but it's really interesting, especially the start, i liked that. don't give up! well done :) |
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d/l-ing.... |
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well done for your first tune :) sounds will get better as you learn your music program better,keep going! |
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i really liked it! it's very atmospheric and as for the first song, i really have to say: thumbs up! :) |
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I definately like the speed of it :). It's transfers from one to another part very smooth. The volume of some things is a little loud maybe, and those sounds are very dry. But I like those large reverb-clouds you used in it. My 1st track was not as good as this one :). I like this tribal rhythm :) |
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Not bad at all for your first tune. Keep at it. I like the bass harmonics melody. |
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its okay. I agree - some sounds are too loud. especially the percusive sounds that come in when the melody comes in for the first time. the melody is okay, nothing special. I like the "reverbclouds" too although they're imo not interesting enough do warrant a 90 sec. intro with them.. it seems the problem is a typical beginners problem - its way too long. also because it seems you're doing the same track twice. when the melody returns nothing really changes. overall good for a first timer, yeah. |
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neetta email me so i remember to download it when i get home, i'm at school right now... |
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*Downloading... |
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I'll dl it in a little bit, I'm trying to get my zebox account straightened out so I can upload a new track... |
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thanks for constructive comments, now i know what to do or not do... |
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well done neetta =oD I can't hear it yet cause I'm in work, but I'll definatley d/l it when I get home I'm going to try and play around with floops (I've been saying that for aaaaaages !!!) but I'm still a bit clueless on how to use the bloody thing =os |
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yeah me too, the softwares are wayyy too confusing to me so i went for hardware :D do you play an instrument? floops looked wayy too scary, i only used softs to effect and then to compile wavs... |
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I'm gonna see if I can save and get a keyboard. I was thinking of a cello but I can prolly have more fun with a keyboard ;o, |
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"the melody is okay, nothing special" Every song or track in its own right is special Just like we as humans are unique and special, we all got our little quirks and personalities that makes us a little different and special I thought this was a really interesting dark ambient style piece, some nice atmosphere and dynamics. I really liked those pulseing springy reverb sounds in the beggining the best. The song was maybe a little to long, but all in all a good first track. Good job Yay! |
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a cello would RULE :)) but true, the keyboard is more verssatile. we have alot of cool intruments here in my house, but i 'd still want a korg-ms20, a moog voyager or at least a better drum machine :) |
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Not bad, interesting effects, nice melody. However the percussion was way too simple.... it is begging some decent beats. For a first effort, all is excused :D |
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Yeah FruityLoops may be a little daunting at first, but once you get into it, it can be very rewarding. Especially if you do it the hard way and teach yourself everything over the course of three months. |
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yeah but i found software that are much much more rewarding to me. and since i do the actual music making on hardware soundforge and n-track do the trick for me |
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i like the constant fzzzzzzzz crunching all the way through |
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yay for soundforge.. :) |
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wow, considering its your first track i think its very well done! you said you use hardware for most of it... what equipment? like other people have said, it has a well developed ambience/feel to it (partly because the sounds are very well done and all fit together with each other very nicely imo), especially good for a first track i really like the melody.. having to wait so long before it comes in only makes it better i think ...the one thing i'd suggest is to do more with the rhythm sounds... to make them more organic/fuzzy(?) sounding to fit in with the rest of the track |
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nice neetta, i played it in windows mediaplayer with visualisation:"Trilogy I - wings" and enjoyed it, sounded and looked cool :) i'm gonna put it in my music folder, suppose one day you'll get famous and don't release this, then i'll have it .. haha no serious, i like it, it doesn't remind me of any artist and that's good i think.. having your own style.. put up some more stuff in the future keep it up eendje :D |
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well done, keep it up ! :( off to class now |
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well, the sad trhuth is i used one piece of hardware, a zoom rhytmtrak 123 drum machine :) for the next track i will also use more organ sounds i think, to get more diversity. |
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i scared you all away |
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downloading as we speak well you know what i mean |
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som tony tiger skulle ha sagt :grrreaaaaat! |
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:D tony tiger! |
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i think it's good. keep experimenting with beats! :) |
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i really like the intro, sort of rhythmic harsh noise, just not so harsh. the drums are ok, melody is alright, but i like how everything sounds a little distorted congratulations on your first track, overall a great job for the first time! |
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Agenta's Skellington track is oddly reminiscent of Celluloïd_Mata_-_Mix_Oscillations_-_08_-_Cinematic_Haunts_ of_the_intense_claustrophobic_Goosander_(By_DJ_Speedranch_& _Janski_Noise), almost as if I wouldn't be so wrong to say that she could be the real brains behind Janskie Noise. Am I alone when I say this? |
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