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plugexpert
from Nijmegen (Netherlands, The) on 2002-06-12 22:47 [#00263108]
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Wassup nu-boarders?
I normally don't upload unfinished tracks,.and maybe I'll leave this one the way it is. but I'd like U 2 give me your honoust opinion on what I created this afternoon.
Lateley I've been straying away from the breakbeat heavy tracks ,.and have invested more time in creating a certain atmospere(.or at least I think I am).
A little diversion from my normal work,.just 2 keep things interesting for myself.
the track is called: "UF"
and can be found at the top of my soundclick page:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/jonastheplugexpert_music.ht m
For anyone interested in checking,......I'll invest time in your tracks.
RZPCT
Richard "Monty Mole" Jonas
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plugexpert
from Nijmegen (Netherlands, The) on 2002-06-12 23:21 [#00263141]
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Come on now,.show a nigga some love!?
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RobE
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-06-12 23:45 [#00263174]
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I listened,and i rather enjoyed it...reminded me of early Kraftwerk. Sounded uncluttered,which is what i like.Loved the main 'China sound' melody(strings?). I'm no Xpert,but i'd have to give it a few more listens for any criticisms. U can hear my tunes when i move my lazy ass....}:>
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plugexpert
from Nijmegen (Netherlands, The) on 2002-06-13 00:01 [#00263208]
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RobE ,...
thnx for taking the time 2 listen 2 my creation,........
"ass-move-tunes" R my favorite
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plugexpert
from Nijmegen (Netherlands, The) on 2002-06-13 01:15 [#00263316]
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anyone else up for a plugexpert bashing?
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skodt
from Toronto (Canada) on 2002-06-13 01:34 [#00263327]
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quite the opposite of bashing! the latter half of the tune is beautiful! to be honest i'm too old for the distrorted stuff at the beginning.
but i have listened to the second half numerous times now. you said that it was unfinished, maybe you should revisit the intro, and i feel that it does end a little too quickly.
it would be safe to lengthen the melody at the end for a few more bars w/o it dragging on, but end it abruptly like that for sure!
i'm going to listen to the rest of yr stuff now!
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plugexpert
from Nijmegen (Netherlands, The) on 2002-06-13 09:24 [#00263675]
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Cheers skodt !
yeah,.the intro part needs some shaving,.I'm thinkin'about adding some effects,.for better transition in the tracks.
RZPCT
(come on,....I know there are more brutally honoust reviewers out there (?))
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Monumrnt
from To (Canada) on 2002-06-13 14:24 [#00264135]
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It feels like all of a sudden something hardcore will enter, but nothing happens :(
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plugexpert
from Nijmegen (Netherlands, The) on 2002-06-13 14:43 [#00264181]
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well,.I started out with a very hardcore beat actually,.that I tweaked and tweaked till all was left consisted of nothing but distorted squeek sounds.
I don't know what it is lately,.but it's like I'm fed up with accoustic drums in my tracks. I pitch them the fuck up or down,.
btw,....why must distorted sounds always have 2 b ascociated with 'hardcore'.
can somebody please define the term "hardcore"?
2 me its everything other then normal/conventional music ,..mostly with a streetlike edge 2 it.
fo shizzel my nizzelz
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doki
from cologne (Germany) on 2002-06-13 15:39 [#00264320]
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nice :)
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plugexpert
from Nijmegen (Netherlands, The) on 2002-06-13 17:05 [#00264477]
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thnx Doki!
NOW does anyone here have tunes that they'd like 2 have comments on?
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weatheredstoner
from same shit babes. (United States) on 2002-06-13 19:58 [#00264771]
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I'm downloading right now...
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weatheredstoner
from same shit babes. (United States) on 2002-06-13 20:09 [#00264799]
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Cool song. But yes i can kinda tell that its not finished yet. I dont know what you could possibly add but it needs a little sumtin sumtin...
good work though
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plugexpert
from Nijmegen (Netherlands, The) on 2002-06-13 20:48 [#00264858]
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cheers weatheredstoner!
I think some reversed action underneath the beats,.incoming reverbs etc. + a smooth bassline 2 accent the melody later on.
But,.maybe I won't change anything,...as I'm already working on a new track
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