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hello again, have yet another new track ready, this one is much slower than the previous few ive put out. anyway, its called Napalm From Heaven and you can hear it right ok, thanks for listening. Quelnt |
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anyone? |
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okay, in general it needs mixing work. the backward string stuff should be pushed back in the mix a bit with some reverb, and brightened up. there's a second synth that comes in, i forget at what time... but i can bearly hear it. the drums need to be brightened up, less muffled. the melody line that comes in around 2:12 is perfect though, i like it a lot. the backwards stings could be varied up here and there. and the drums don't gel with the rest of the song at times... those are only my major complaints. interesting melodies, i liked them... keep at it.sorry if i sound harsh, but if people want crtique i try not to hold back. |
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no one else? please? |
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don't be surprised at the lack of support for musicians on this board/community - i'm downloading it now. are my tunes - basement dweller/liquid reverie are the new ones i'll let you know what i think once it's downloaded |
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NAME marlowe LOCATION tibet CODENAME the invisible monk ok, here are my thoughts - the wavering strings at the beginning sounded a bit cheap until they were grounded by the entrance of the SAWII-esque banging, which i really liked. the first couple of minutes started to get a bit repetitive, but i liked the squishy melody that kicked in shortly after the two-minute mark. it sounds a bit like a fusion of a few aphex tracks, mainly in the atmosphere it creates rather than having stolen anything. i did like it, but i think it needs to move more, even though it is an ambient track. PRESENTATION 7/10 MIX 6/10 TECHNIQUE 7/10 OVER-ALL 7/10 |
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Listening now, Quelnt. I like it--I do think the volume levels could be reworked a touch, but other than that, I think it's a very interesting track. Good effort; keep up the good work! |
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fuck, i posted to the wrong bloody song |
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fuck again - no i didn't |
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heh, thank you very much both of you, ill check out your stuff later in the day marlowe, im on my way to play live, my first show, pretty exciting, and then i have work, i will find the time to listen to your stuff though, though it may be much later tonight |
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What sort of equipment do you use for live stuff, Quelnt? |
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shit, GOOD LUCK MAN!!!!! |
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