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its not finished, it could be a lot more accurated and detailed and better, but it will provably rest like this, as im already a bit tired of it, but, well, if you have some wise advices to improve it and i think theyd be easy to implement, they surelly be welcome! it started as a live session i wanted to prepare, but i could not avoid making a tune of this two pieces. all in reason, acidish begging to reggae-feel ending. i hope you enjoy! |
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fix the link so we can listen. |
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linkie dont workie no |
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Maybe the track or user has been removed |
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strange thing, it works for me... |
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maybe you have it set to private? |
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:) should work now with the secret link... |
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, so that original link may work. noone but you will maybe listen anyway... |
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cheers, mel |
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- shorten it as much as you can - maybe ~5minutes max ? 4 minutes ? as it has no special intro nor outro, it could be easily done. but that's me - I prefer my tracks to be as short as possible maybe try aiming for a ~3 minutes long track - and you get something ~ 4 minutes long, and make room for the last minute of track, which is quite pleasant. I hope I'm making myself clear enough, cheers |
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I def think you should shorten it. I'm not that in love wit the actual sounds - the piano and the bass. but I liked it when you broke the track down and gave it some space at 5:00. I would work with that and see where that goes. I don't really like the polished rhythmic stuff, I like your other tracks more btw. |
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thanks for advices mates, i will give them a try! as i said before, it wasnt intended to be a track, just some progressive melodies to mix with live drums... in fact, my real intention was to make each different part longer, adding new drums or dunno... just looking for something to work on a live session... but ive run out of motivation with that already, thats why i exported that part as a track. at least, it worked as a therapy to cure some saddness on last week :) thank for listening! |
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if anyone still wants to listen and give constructive criticism, go fast, i will delete the track later or tomorrow or soon, to work on a shorter better version ;) a more real and cohesive track |
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sadness is good, look how much money enigma got out of it :wink: |
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i agree with you robbie, some kind of saddness are good and even pleasant, but language (and specially a foreign one) is not accurate enough to explain the world, and i didnt wanted that kind of saddness, frustrating boring saddness... anyway, ive replied you on soundcloud! :) |
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is original shorter version if anyone interested at all.. |
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