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yann_g
from now on 2011-07-25 21:45 [#02418146]
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A track I made recently, criticism welcome :)
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melack
from barcielwave on 2011-07-25 21:53 [#02418149]
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on first listen, id say i really like it, specially the overall sounding, the melting melodies videogame running style, the unpredictable progression.
for my taste, theres something lacking on the drums, always the same sounds, sounding to thin, not enough powerfull, only speed/number variation, or something. maybe just making them loouder and some fx/reverb may help, dunno
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2011-07-25 22:23 [#02418150]
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Very nice, what software used? Maybe bass melody could be louder at beginning.
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Falito
from Balenciaga on 2011-07-25 22:28 [#02418151]
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jaja, i like it.
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yann_g
from now on 2011-07-25 23:16 [#02418156]
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thanks guys!
@ melack: you mean some strongly hit snare instead of the rimshot? might try that. isn't the kick loud enough?
@w M w: thanks for suggesting, i'll try that out. software used is Reason 5 exclusively. love the Thor!
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melack
from barcielwave on 2011-07-26 00:07 [#02418161]
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dunno exactly what i mean, its like i dont get the feel, i like the progression you made, everytime more compulsive and shit, but i dont really get into it, it just remains there, a bit plain.
it should be, dunno, more different, more evolving and morphing for my taste, not always de same sound kicking and kicking the same... maybe just a matter of frequency cut changing or something
(holy shit, sorry for such a bad explanation :S)
its a similar sensation to what i felt with hello everything (in fact that tune of yours would fit perfectly in that album) on first listening, and now i love it. so maybe thats what you wanted too, the melodies being the important thing, and the drums just driving you on a second plane
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yann_g
from now on 2011-07-27 12:30 [#02418258]
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i get the hello everything reference, i was quite frustrated by the drums on some tracks, thanks for the effort! ;)
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