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paige__turner
from Sultan City (Barbados) on 2011-02-03 05:24 [#02405339]
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i never made a music before but i tried re what do you think about this song?
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big
from lsg on 2011-02-03 10:26 [#02405344]
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keep practicing
i like the 80ties sounds and the sounds or melodies in general are entertaining enough
it doesn't move enough though and you just keep throwing in sounds without it being clear what their purpose is for the track development. i guess it's a typical first in that sense. so that's what you should experiment with next: song structure (a song going nowhere can be a structure too, but it's different when you actually choose for it)
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paige__turner
from Sultan City (Barbados) on 2011-02-04 01:57 [#02405392]
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O thank you for listening.
It is still the demo I develop it further. I will create the better chorus and then a second chorus then a bridge, come back to chorus then raise the whole thing a third for the triumphant end game. Your feedback is true it still needs the work.
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