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offline paige__turner from Sultan City (Barbados) on 2011-02-03 05:24 [#02405339]
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i never made a music before but i tried re what do you think
about this song?


 

offline big from lsg on 2011-02-03 10:26 [#02405344]
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keep practicing

i like the 80ties sounds and the sounds or melodies in
general are entertaining enough

it doesn't move enough though and you just keep throwing in
sounds without it being clear what their purpose is for the
track development. i guess it's a typical first in that
sense. so that's what you should experiment with next: song
structure (a song going nowhere can be a structure too, but
it's different when you actually choose for it)


 

offline paige__turner from Sultan City (Barbados) on 2011-02-04 01:57 [#02405392]
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O thank you for listening.

It is still the demo I develop it further. I will create
the better chorus and then a second chorus then a bridge,
come back to chorus then raise the whole thing a third for
the triumphant end game. Your feedback is true it still
needs the work.


 


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