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CHECK IT OUT ALREADY! |
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"fuck you i wont do what you tell me!!!!" (RATM) I had a listen and i don't know what to say ? Your other tracks where more interesting me thinks. |
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...could you at least tell me whats boring about it? |
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well...it's called a demo for a reason...back to the drawin board |
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its nice.......... (ratm) what teh fuk---its not rage against the machine.... is there only the 1 track from this link? |
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it is RATM..."those who died are justified..."... |
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only this track...I working on the track right now |
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RATM suck!! "...could you at least tell me whats boring about it?" well don't listen to me and do what you feel man : ) |
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As i said i like your previous work. If it makes you feel any better? |
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nice pic sido |
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CHECK IT OUT AGAIN...i have added some new things...used new efx |
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checkin it! |
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need to even the sound levels out a bit, cos i can only really hear the bass drum thing |
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I think it needs more bells and whistles and details and layers. If you want to go for a minimalistic approach à la Kraftwerk or so, you'll need a stronger melody, this one is too bland to "be" a song on it's own. So my advice is : either throw in a pile of sub-melodies and noises, and it might turn into something cool(er), or either re-work the melody. |
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thanx....i'll work on it =) |
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...and eh...oh yeah...chek out for more mp3's |
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There is only this "old baked" sounding bassline......not much going on in your track........it needs more stuff like percussions....more musical elements or and more intresting bassline ! |
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