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Jesus. |
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what's up REFLEX? |
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A life without tobacco is a life not worth living! Now, thats pottery for you! |
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evol hers my interpritation of your first message!.......................................... to cover can you that us of a phase apart from our effectiveness one day to the bottom the road in our lives? entered the sides of the history of these books they in the school which read that ya at the school, yo. do you point out taught when above, what occurred yesterday was right a memory that ya? _ which they can however now indicate them 3 and to have behind feared door # that to be able to him. Whole moment singing, such as you are really happy, if you are really frightened. Insane maintained does not apply even to you. Although, as desperate him it destiny it is after higher dreams which regulating invisible rôder comiquement aspires mimivking their neurological relation of line connector cord multiple uniformity to seem to be able to receive, the estimates of Vitalitaet to him the point weakest all outside the war between two dawgs loco, ese. I would like to communicate to them more, am any good him exactly the same thing as this one in the chronological sequence. |
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i fed it through several language translators! |
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Thats cool! |
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SHAVETHAT MESS YOUNG MAN! |
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are U talking to me!?!?!?! |
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YES!!!!! |
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that's pretty neat-o |
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I wrote this as a parody of typical teen poetry. enjoy: Poetry by Numbers open with an image hopefully striking but likely cliché, banal, boring which segues to a metaphor extended, detailed obvious exposition description pontification follow broken syntax odd line- breaks random indentations create an illusion of depth until at last, wit (or a reasonable facsimile thereof) and cheesy closing lines |
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i only write when i'm ecstatic in bed and can't sleep. sadness leaves me with writers block, though i think i remember writing in depression during jr high. |
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MORG DOBWCPT poetry by numbers 2 When to poem of the side all it went with an inside well, year Numbers but it was possible in conference and the picture, the segues be born it inquires in the banal plate and this metaphor of they, to be clear is the pontification, the depiction of exhibition 2' the E which depth illusion it creates ci screen, spirit (or the facsimile which is fit) and becomes the line cheese agreement cause which closes inside the detail fact which is described the syntax good intention which breaks impression it follows the cut which is odd |
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world.altavista.com babel fish translator is so cool for coming up with poetry and track names! |
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babelfish is fun |
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"here, arriving for..., you recognize your last voyage me, with your tired eyes, tired bodies and tired Seele? I however am not carried outside anything, others lost, does not tire and as you gives it here of Goettlichkeiten, and all does not have to me... on the point one your is liked not y have me is not either on the point as you and is to us on the point precisely to be forgotten, disappears us right and involves on this one the Black Sea, under last cold stars... then drowns us and each one forgets on us... which it was not any more always in this way and this one east is always our last voyage and my last Heartbreak. me hoped, after these years would remember calmement you me..., that does not constitute now." systran-ed! (original version, as you can guess, came from my diary in a not-so-happy day...) |
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i couldn’t give a flying fuck what people think when they generralise to the degrree they have done in this thrread. the only rreason therre is so much shit teen poetrry out therre is because they have the gut's allow people to rread it. Morg DOBWCPT, how about you give us one of yourr amazing poems to rread ey? |
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Morg DOBWCPT hasn't posted in nearly 10 months, daddio. |
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hummm verry convenient that i challenged him and by the grrace of god he hasn’t posted in months... amost too convenient some might say... |
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REFLEX > teenage poetry can be very risible, i agree with you... but i think it's written more for cathartic purpose than for artistic... |
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i want to be a poetry too! here's one: butchering up her face in front of the mirror: 'honey the kids are on strike they're marching through the backyard and spitting on the swingset' picking at his scabs and spinning the lazy susan: 'dear the chores will get done with the children or without them we should try our best to ignore the cries and whi(s/m)pering' screaming and choking at their skies and plucking weeds: 'guys we should've made bigger signs and spilled more of our blood on the grass' |
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i adorre you little poems Clipper, they make me smile. |
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man, you suck. |
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who? |
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anyone who writes poetry. |
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thank you anus...shit on you beeblebrox |
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wow, that was poetic. |
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yeah.. poetry's for faggots. if you have the time to write a poem, you should spend it polishing your guns or selling crack to schoolchildren instead. |
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hey, watch your mouth newbie. |
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sorry, sorry... just kidding and all |
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