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pulseclock
from Downtown 81 on 2009-03-07 10:38 [#02277762]
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Guybrush
from the white room on 2009-03-07 11:50 [#02277774]
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I only read the last words of that story and they were 'it is a story that never ends'. Yeah right. I've seen the 'never ending story'. Once bitten twice shy and all that
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Tractern
from Brighton (United Kingdom) on 2009-03-08 18:19 [#02278144]
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This reminded me of Siddhartha by Herman Hesse a bit, though it wasn't quite as good.
The line "legs crossed like a pretzel" was ridiculously inappropriate. This modern reference was really out of line with the feel of the story.
The end was pretty good and I enjoyed it overall.
Did you write this?
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Olrox
from Dracula's castle on 2009-03-08 20:01 [#02278175]
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I liked it, reminds me of that post I just made not all that long ago about no one ever truly knowing what reality is (the truth, the end of the story, etc.)
Hahahah, when I read the end the theme song for never ending story popped into my head
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mohamed
from the turtle business on 2009-03-09 06:53 [#02278273]
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