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http://rapidshare.com/files/142944042/RHCPRAWK.mp3.html Looking to improve. I would greatly appreciate anything suggestions, positive or negative on this. Thanks |
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this sounds and feels like it has been inspired by a generation of midi computer game sound tracks. the arrangement is good and obviously you know 'music' which is more than can be said for most people here with their atonal nonsense. the timbre doesnt exactly float my goat, and it seems to noodle off a bit at the end.... some nice moments in it though, bordering on epic. what i will say is use something better than rapid share. |
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i would post some words to let you know is a good and deep track, but i shut up.thank u 2 |
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Ok, thanks for the feedback. Ok so, I never listened to the rapid share link, I'm guessing it dampers the quality quite a bit then. The sounds of the instruments aren't to my liking a whole lot either...I do like the orchestral stuff, but my samples just don't sound great as is, I will do some tweaking. What you say about the end makes sense as well. Thanks again for the input, much appreciated. peace. |
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Thanks Falito, I understand what you mean. |
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not my cup of tea, sorry. |
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this was pretty good... the harmonies seemed "off" to me the first time I listened, but on the second go it clicked a lot more. nice crisp production as well... what software/hardware did you use here? |
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I used reason for this, on my laptop, that well, is just good enough to do what I want it do I guess. What you said about the harmonies not clicking the first time through, and then clicking later seems interesting to me. Thanks for giving it a listen and feedback, much appreciated. I will post the full version of the song at some point after I upload it to my last.fm account. |
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It wasn't funny enough |
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True |
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The sounds are really kitchy, and i can't figure out if it's intentional. Other than that, i actually really like it. As noseburger said, it reminds you of old video game midi soundtracks (Ultima underworld for example). Well done! |
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Another thought, the low freq string (violin?) from 0:25 - 0:55 has a strange attack. I know it's probably supposed to be tension building, followed by the "epic" part right after, but it just ends up sounding weird. The epic part will remain epic, even if you put a sharp attack, and longer decay, release on the violin. Very nitpicky. |
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Thanks again for the feedback. Ya..... the sounds really do sound corny, this will be another one of those that sits on my hd. I might change all the instruments to electronic sounding ones and see if it sounds good at all. That low freq. string is a cello in the background miming the "riff" that is being played by other strings in a higher register (at the beginning). I am very nit picky also, how can you get better if you don't nit pick? Peace. |
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Have you got a link to some more music? Your music actually intrigues me. |
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Ya actually, I post some of my stuff here http://www.last.fm/music/goatsniffer/x89 Hopefully you enjoy it. I go through my hd from time to time and try to pick out stuff that I think is decent or at least interesting, because by the time I get done with a piece, I always hate it because I have heard it too many times. I need ear rest. Peace, DirtyPriest |
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