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offline cx from Norway on 2008-01-24 16:16 [#02167195]
Points: 4537 Status: Regular



I need some help with this track in preparation for my
album, so if anyone can give any kind of critique that comes
to mind, i would be glad.

its kinda slow and sad, and its actually something i care
about a lot i guess..

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offline melack from barcielwave on 2008-01-25 04:07 [#02167287]
Points: 9099 Status: Regular



i dont think the two melody lines really fit together, the
piano + the guitar... and it doesnt sounds really sad to
me, well maybe a little bit ingenous sadness with
pretentious hope... a bit like an interlude track for
teenage-girls film or something... and it is a bit
repetitive also. maybe if you try to fix the melodies and
turn it into a romantic parody, making it growing into
absurd and adding a love dialogue, it would be something
great and funny... its only my opinion and im being serious.


 

offline cx from Norway on 2008-01-25 04:32 [#02167296]
Points: 4537 Status: Regular



thanks mate for the post!

today i may definetly make it build..
im not sure whats wrong with the melodies, although i admit
they could be confusing on first listen, kinda need to grow
into the rhythm sometimes.

im going to try and make it build.

 

offline thecurbcreeper from United States on 2008-01-25 04:38 [#02167299]
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i like those fast bits.

 

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