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offline oscillik from the fires of orc on 2007-12-06 07:36 [#02151307]
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in
Logic ?

seriously, i can't seem to make anything "gel" right :(

can anyone advise? maybe some different approach to the
music?

DrinkSlipMats, as much as i know you hate my musical output,
i would really appreciate your constructive input here

also from other xlt music-ers (i just specifically mentioned
SlipDrinkMats because i have some gay love for him)


 

offline tolstoyed from the ocean on 2007-12-06 07:48 [#02151309]
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both tracks sound like freshened up john carpenter's music.
i don't think there's something in particualr wrong with
your music and i can't see why people into electronic music
wouldn't like this.. im not a good reference when it comes
to electronic music so you shouldn't pay attention to what
im about to say : ) im generally interested in 'original'
music that sounds different to any other stuff i know (with
some exceptions) and therefore i don't pay much attention to
all this new electronica production..but there are people
who only listen to this sort of electronic music and dunno
why they wouldn't listen to it : )


 

offline larn from PLANET E (United Kingdom) on 2007-12-06 07:50 [#02151310]
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i think it sounds alright, maybe try tuning your drum kits,
not many people think to do that, but it makes it sound so
much tighter. i dont know what equipment your using apart
from logic, if youv got a modeling synth, or something like
reaktor you can get some nice sounds. i suppose what your
trying to do is get a signiture sound. not easy, but it will
come in time. good luck (sorry i cant help much)


 

offline Drunken Mastah from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2007-12-06 08:00 [#02151312]
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Because you use sounds that sound like the default sounds in
fruityloops?


 

offline oscillik from the fires of orc on 2007-12-06 08:02 [#02151313]
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funny, didn't know you could get fruityloops for the
Macintosh

:p


 

offline oscillik from the fires of orc on 2007-12-06 08:05 [#02151314]
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thanks tolstoyed, and larn

yeah, i have a propensity to make drums too prominent in the
mix :-s

i can't do compression to save my fucking life :(


 

offline swears from junk sleep on 2007-12-06 08:26 [#02151318]
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Talking to people that (unlike me) actually know something
about sound engineering and music production, there's no one
"magic bullet" to make a tune sound good. It's dozens of
little things you have to get to work together, mixing,
comperession, eq, effects, "space", etc, etc...and how all
those elements correlate. If you adjust certain eq levels,
you might have to tweak the compression to compensate and so
on. Decent speakers help a lot though.


 

offline Barcode from United Kingdom on 2007-12-06 08:40 [#02151319]
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The best thing you can do is get a favourite electronic
track and try to copy it, note for note. Make sure it's
from a decent artist like FSOL, Vibert, old Moby even or
maybe a simple Aphex ambient track. Choose a track which is
bright, easy to replicate with plenty of dynamic range
(highs and lows).

You will learn an incredible amount from doing this. Don't
stop after 5 minutes, finish the track to completion.

The track you have uploaded is really dreadful. Everything
is low end, dull, boring - the lead synth sound is awful -
the track doesn't communicate anything and doesn't go
anywhere. It has no momentum and your sound levels are all
wrong.

Practice make perfect though. Some people simple haven't got
what it takes, but if you're determined and genuinely love
making music you will get better and better. If you're
rushing your music and doing it to look cool you might as
well give up.

It can take years to hone your sound until it's really
professional, so stop sending crappy embarrassing tracks to
people when you don't know what you're doing. Send them when
YOU KNOW they're good and 100% confident about them. When,
at least technically, they're on a par with what most modern
electronic artists are releasing right across the board, you
can be bold enough to make a CD or put tracks online.
Otherwise you're one of just 1 of 1 million home producers
on MySpace.


 

offline Skink from A cesspool in eden on 2007-12-06 08:47 [#02151320]
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Very sound advice there.

I wish i could listen to the clips in question but i have no
sound here at the minute.


 

offline fleetmouse from Horny for Truth on 2007-12-06 08:48 [#02151321]
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Jesus Christ, it sounds like the soundtrack to clinical
depression.

Go listen to some Abba, James Brown, John Philip Sousa,
Perrey and Kingsley, the Benny Hill theme, anything with a
bit of fun and a bounce to it. And get some SUNLIGHT ON YOUR
FACE. PLAY WITH KITTENS AND PUPPIES.


 

offline BoxBob-K23 from Finland on 2007-12-06 09:51 [#02151331]
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the first one is promising, the second one sound a bit flat
to be honest.

maybe your samples are not good enough, or at least not
processed enough... try playing around with different
frequencies and filters, and don't let crude blocks of sound
material hit the listener in the face!


 

offline vlari from beyond the valley of the LOLs on 2007-12-06 10:00 [#02151332]
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these gel just fine, sir


 

offline pulseclock from Downtown 81 on 2007-12-06 10:04 [#02151333]
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dont let anyone tell you that you don't have it. People can
do anything they want to. it's all about if they really want
to. You might just need something else right now.

I'm sure in Aphex's years between age 14 and blah blah when
he was making stuff on SAW and shit, he took his time and
let life kind of happen, he wasnt trying to rush things, i'm
sure he probably made that stuff after a long period of
feeling wierd or bad about things, and he just kind of
started making music that fi tthat atmosphere he felt he was
in. Like if you feel that you have something to give back to
the world that you are in right now, then you should do just
that.

the truth is, like what if someone totally Genius or
whatever has this awesome music right now, but never
released it or showed anybody, and just did it for himself,
it wouldnt get anywhere and it would have no purpose except
for him.

it makes sense to want to be heard and be good at what you
do, or even be the best, but you have to be ready for and
actually feel it.

i usually end up feeling like im one of those 1 out of 1
million people on myspace, but then remember that i dont
give a fuck about myspace, and i dont give a fuckifpeople
likemy music or not, but its music and ill just make it
cause its cool to do when im bored or feeling some feeling i
want to get out.


 

offline plaidzebra from so long, xlt on 2007-12-06 10:23 [#02151335]
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i didn't listen since i don't have sound at the moment, but
this waffle guy knows what he's talking about.

btw, try making your waffles with some unsalted, melted
butter mixed into the batter. also, some coarse corn meal.

the joy is in the feeling, not the technique. you can find
the feeling...

i wholeheartedly recommend clearing your mind and taking
some james brown.

whatever you do, don't underestimate the waffle.


 

offline manicminer from Paris (France) on 2007-12-06 11:06 [#02151339]
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sounds pretty good to me......


 

offline Drunken Mastah from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2007-12-06 11:55 [#02151345]
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Hahaha, is that an inside mac-owner joke of some kind?

Well, what I meant was that, usually, when I can't get stuff
to "gel," I just exchange those sounds that can be
exchanged. Maybe you just need to use different
drumsamples?

I've often noticed that if you think stuff feels flat, you
can

(a1) Record percussion using a mic. Just bang on stuff and
record it. The reverb in any room and the "real" sound of it
will help massively.

(a2) Record the melodies (and/or the percussion) by playing
it back on while recording it, if you can set your soundcard
to do this in such a way that you still avoid feedback. With
regards to this, recording it to tape or reel-to-reel also
has a good effect.

(b) Overdub: Record the melody line several times if the
instrument is one such that each time you play it, it will
have some sort of phase or pitch difference (usually both).

(c) Play the melody line again with a different instrument,
and possibly on a different octave. "Secondary melodies" (I
don't know the English term) also help.

I don't know shit about mastering and stuff like that,
though, but usually it works out for me anyway because..
well, I don't know why, but I like the way my music turns
out when I like the way it turns out. Try adding
compression. Some people think compression is some kind of
magic, other people, those who know something about it, tell
people to be wary of seeing compression as some kind of
magic that can cure all ailments including AIDS. Usually,
however, they don't seem to be able to actually give any
concrete form of advice except for boring things like
"listen to music and copy it yo!" However, other experts say
that "most things have boring elements" and that "you'll
just have to live with it." Now, because everyone's afraid
of "paternalism," I can't tell you who you should listen to,
and it can't even be obvious, but I know who I listen to: w
M w.


 

offline BoxBob-K23 from Finland on 2007-12-06 12:00 [#02151346]
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"I like the way my music turns
out when I like the way it turns out"

thinking like this makes the world go around


 

offline Drunken Mastah from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2007-12-06 12:01 [#02151347]
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So does drinking too much.


 

offline Barcode from United Kingdom on 2007-12-06 13:10 [#02151374]
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He's not ready to do "compression". He doesn't even know how
to structure a track seamlessly or get the sound levels
right. Have you heard his MP3s or just trying to fuck him up
for fun?

He's at 12-year-old level. He is a beginner and needs to
keep it simple, not start farting around with compression
and overdubs.

Yeah, copying others music is boring - but most people spend
a little time doing that if they have any sense. Those that
just jump into it and think they know everything before they
start are always hopeless, boring everyone to death with
their crappy, unlistenable demos. I've seen it, and
unfortunately heard it, a thousand times before.


 

offline metal_trees from the real world on 2007-12-06 21:06 [#02151503]
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here's the first step- stop caring about what other people
think. if a track you made doesn't get you off then there's
no fucking point. you have to feel it before anyone else
can.

compression, eqing, mastering, tuning...they are all
important to a certain extent. but when it comes down to
it, they are meaningless.

a lot of the best, and most moving songs out there, were
recorded using nothing more that a four track.

it's about picking up on a feeling, a vibe, an energy. over
think it, and you'll fuck it all up. it has to move you.

as far as the "gel" of these tracks...uh, i would say they
"gel" fine, you might be over analyzing them. they actually
sound way too safe.

some people are just uppity twats, don't let them bring you
down.



 

offline swears from junk sleep on 2007-12-07 05:51 [#02151617]
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I think the problem with 99% of music is that people like
the IDEA of being a musician, the glamour of it. So you have
a bunch of fellas that want to be in a band for the sake of
being in a band, or people making electronic music for the
sake of being some kind of IDM boffin or whatever...

And they cobble together some shit music to reach that goal,
almost as an afterthought. A musician has to be really good
at what they do and maybe bring something new to the table.
Then you present it to people and the success is the result
of coming up with this great music, not the other way
around.


 

offline Barcode from United Kingdom on 2007-12-07 06:16 [#02151625]
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Wise words.

The biggest factor amongst "bedroom producers" is people
thinking they're better than they are - the ego has no
bounds.

Face it, any imbecile can slap a load of samples together
and make a track - any imbecile can even make it sound good
with today's technology.

If you think that artists like U-Ziq and Vibert can probably
only sell about 3,000 albums nowadays, what chance have you
got?

I think the IDM genre is the worst for people actually
thinking they can make music when they haven't got a clue
what they're doing. The technology is so affordable that any
fool can have a crack at it - but the ratio of people who
are actually any good at it is the same as it ever was,
absolutely tiny.

10 years ago these people would never get heard and their
demos would be binned by record labels in 5 seconds - and
rightly so - but with the rise of computer technology they
can upload their crap instantaneously and everyone has to
suffer.


 

offline pulseclock from Downtown 81 on 2007-12-07 06:52 [#02151628]
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theres always another chance to do the right thing. you are
never just an imbecile. or just egotstical, those are just
results from your intentions. if you have the right
intentions about something, you will reach any goal. who
cares if people want to still call their music IDM. theyre
obviously into it for the clique aspect of it.

be positive.


 

offline swears from junk sleep on 2007-12-07 08:11 [#02151643]
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"if you have the right
intentions about something, you will reach any goal"

But sadly, this just isn't true. There are people who
despite their best intentions, can't even get a regular job
or support a family, nevermind become a successful musician.


 

offline Barcode from United Kingdom on 2007-12-07 09:07 [#02151656]
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I disagree, I believe that anyone can achieve practically
anything they want. Maybe not in a physical capacity, like
top sportsman, because genetically you may be at a
disadvantage to others, although there is still plenty of
scope for success in many areas - for example there are
thousands of professional footballers who earn thousands a
week through hard work and determination who have negligible
natural talent.

But mentally you can achieve practically anything, become
successful and make money. It's all to do with drive and
ambition - both are rather ugly characteristics, but if you
have them you'll succeed.

There is almost a template for being successful. You can
learn and regurgitate anything through books, master
anything through repetition, manipulate anyone through
willpower and strength of character. All are achievable to
practically anyone, no matter what your background - as long
as you live in a democracy and have average levels of
intelligence.

The difference between those who succeed and those who
don't, is that those who fail don't have the staying power
or drive to work like an absolute dog, take every knock back
and just keep going and going and going - ie. the vast
majority of people.


 

offline Phone from Paris (France) on 2007-12-07 09:40 [#02151677]
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This music is okay because it is not like the crap pop music
everybody is playing out of their rooms (it is so ANNOYING!)


 

offline BoxBob-K23 from Finland on 2007-12-07 09:42 [#02151678]
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but i think that success is not all that matters. Certainly
not in art. Of course, music can be a business, too, and a
means for living. But the chances for that are slim.
Especially if you still care about art for art's sake. Most
of my favourite musicians don't make tons of money. Most of
them probably will have other means of income on the side. I
personally have few ambitions of making lots of money of my
music, but that's just because I believe in copyleft
principles and am mostly concerned about spreading music
around - and if they, in addition, want to pay for it,
that's all good. But that's not my driving force. Creation
and sharing is.

Now, I agree with the premise that almost anything is
possible, by definition, since we have free choices - it's
just that we are preconditioned to make certain kinds of
choices and engage in certain well-worn patterns of
behaviour. Art is one of the best means of ridding oneself
of preconditioned responses. That's why it's not helpful to
think about music in terms of "what will people think" or
"what is the purpose of this"... Free your mind and the rest
will follow. There are NO techniques of composition that are
a must-learn or a do-first. Most of them are useful and
helpful for specific purposes, but creativity itself must
come first.


 

offline Barcode from United Kingdom on 2007-12-07 11:26 [#02151706]
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Is it possible to be creative at all? Everything you know
has been put in there by others and you can therefore only
reference second hand information. You may be unique
physically, but nothing in your head is unique. From an
intellectual perspective, you, like everybody else, are a
second-hand human. Nothing new can come from that.

Furthermore, everyone has access to the same information and
by and large the same instruments - especially within
electronic music, so even originality, a step-down from
creativity, is somewhat muted.


 

offline BoxBob-K23 from Finland on 2007-12-07 11:32 [#02151710]
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that's a very reductive, behaviourist attitude, although it
is much in line with what you said earlier... But if nothing
new can come from something that is influenced by something
else, than nothing new can appear at all, ever. Hence,
change ought to be impossible. We're doomed to
self-repetition. But facts speak of evolution and
mutability.


 

offline Sano on 2007-12-07 11:55 [#02151724]
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Apart from the dodgy drum programming those were actually
pretty cool sounding.


 

offline pulseclock from Downtown 81 on 2007-12-07 12:15 [#02151736]
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it sounds good


 

offline Barcode from United Kingdom on 2007-12-07 12:49 [#02151766]
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Reductionism is an intellectual theory, I see "no
creativity" as a fact not an ideology.

Evolution takes place over millions of years and lies within
the physical domain, whereas making music is based on
thought processes - whether thought has ever evolved is
questionable.

Thought may hone itself, become more sophisticated, but
evolve? Doesn't seem to be any evidence does there? So, no,
as far as I can see nothing truly creative can come out of
thought, maybe ever - just a constant regurgitation or
refinement of what has gone before. Music obviously falls
into that domain.


 

offline pulseclock from Downtown 81 on 2007-12-07 13:01 [#02151774]
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youre a smarty :)


 

offline SlipDrinkMats from Thanks (Bhutan) on 2007-12-10 13:43 [#02152896]
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I like the track, i have a gay weakness for anything
Carpenter-esque, but it's an good track nonetheless, I
wouldn't worry.

God I'm fucked,


 

offline linus from Norway on 2007-12-10 14:22 [#02152905]
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i can't hear anything carpenteresque on those tunes...


 

offline linus from Norway on 2007-12-10 14:22 [#02152906]
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on those tunes yes very much thank you hello? speak & spell.


 

offline BoxBob-K23 from Finland on 2007-12-10 14:46 [#02152910]
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oh i see, it's a 'fact' not 'ideology' ... hmm

I can't even begin to fathom where you get your fishy
'facts' from. These ideas are clearly not as obvious or
self-evident as you make them out to be, otherwise we'd all
be saying the same thing :)



 

offline ecnadniarb on 2007-12-29 22:08 [#02159112]
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I've been listening to these tracks again trying to remember
who made them. I really like them.


 

offline darkpromenade from Australia on 2007-12-30 02:11 [#02159121]
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please post a larger version of your avatar..........

also, happy new year and stuff.....

bla bla bla


 

offline darkpromenade from Australia on 2007-12-30 02:13 [#02159122]
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it's 1941hrs and 39 degrees C.

i want to go for a run



 

offline Fah from Netherlands, The on 2007-12-30 10:58 [#02159204]
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you crazy ogre it's 1858hrs and -3 degrees C.

now go for that fucking run


 

offline oscillik from the fires of orc on 2007-12-30 14:16 [#02159247]
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i have changed the second one a little if you'd be
interested in having an ear-gander?


 

offline oscillik from the fires of orc on 2007-12-30 14:23 [#02159250]
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helps if i give the link to the new incarnation of the
track

LAZY_TRACK


 

offline HmND from your mom (Israel) on 2008-01-01 19:00 [#02159812]
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It sounds nice, but it's forgettable. I don't know, it just
lacks something. But none the less, it's very nice.


 

offline oscillik from the fires of orc on 2008-01-02 13:59 [#02159883]
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yeah, it's the problem i've been having lately :(


 

offline pulseclock from Downtown 81 on 2008-01-02 15:07 [#02159889]
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go and replicate an aphex track, it will make you feel good
about yourself,
just draw inspiration from things.


 

offline oscillik from the fires of orc on 2008-01-02 15:42 [#02159898]
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recent events have been bad (to the point where i've done
the whole "shave my head purification thing again), so i'm
hoping i can draw some kind of inspiration from that.

thanks for your reply


 

offline pulseclock from Downtown 81 on 2008-01-02 17:12 [#02159910]
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yeah man give yourself a chance,


 

offline bogala from NYC (United States) on 2008-01-02 17:29 [#02159916]
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There is a reason people spend thousands of dollars on
equipment. It sounds better. Maybe get an old synth that is
really good but used. Learn it inside out. Make some tracks
on just that synth. Get a juno and a 606. The computer can
be confusing and also can sound very flat.


 

offline HmND from your mom (Israel) on 2008-01-02 18:12 [#02159920]
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Equipment doesn't mean shit when you don't have the right
inspiration and understanding of what do you want from the
track. My suggestion to the op music maker: make something
you find beautiful, but don't release it publicly. Just keep
it around and keep revising it until you realize what's
missing in it. Either a melody, some effects, some bass or
whatever or a whole make-over. I've known this "artist
block" and it can be really frustrating. For me, I was stuck
in such phase for about a year. My most important
suggestion? Do new things in life. Do things you never dared
to do, listen to music you would never listen to, travel
around, meet new people etc. Life experiences can really
change your perspective on music making and on the way your
brain analyzes how to spill your ideas into constructive
music production.


 


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