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offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-25 22:36 [#00456417]
Points: 1769 Status: Regular



lol well, the name "bile" was already taken when i signed
up, so that was the next thing i thought of

and now on to picture #2!

anyone else got a short poem they'd like to share? you'll be
famous!


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-25 22:39 [#00456422]
Points: 1769 Status: Regular



woops! i just had to fix the "blanket of ashes" picture (i
noticed in the picture, the word 'ashes' got cut off) - so
the new link to that image is: right here


 

offline LeCoeur from the outer edge of the universe (United States) on 2002-11-25 22:39 [#00456424]
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hahahha

well before anyone could TAKE it i signed up MY name on
deviant art so i could make comments.....i can't figure out
how to do that yet but when i do i will.....ehehhehehhe


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-25 22:44 [#00456429]
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once you've logged in, just go to this page and scroll
down... in the center there will be a message box you can
type in to leave a comment :)


 

offline Zeus from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-11-25 22:45 [#00456432]
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i think ive posted this awhile ago.

its my opus of poems. Like shakespears haikus.

"There once was a boy,
one day he found a dime,
it made him happy,
until he realised,
you cant buy jack shit with ten cents."

©Zeus 2002


 

offline DaWeeze from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-11-25 22:55 [#00456441]
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Oooooooo...the mind boggles....

;)


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-25 22:56 [#00456442]
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hahaha
that's very nice, but not exactly the 'tone' i'm looking for
;P

i might use it anyhow, with your permission of course


 

offline Zeus from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-11-25 22:59 [#00456445]
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i think its dark.

dont be fooled by its playful overtones.



 

offline LeCoeur from the outer edge of the universe (United States) on 2002-11-25 23:15 [#00456469]
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finally FIGURED it out.......ehehhe

my comment is posted, and i saved a copy of your artwork to
my computer!

once again, great job!


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-25 23:18 [#00456472]
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thanks! :)

speaking of which, i should try and use some of those cat
pictures you sent me hehehe


 

offline DaWeeze from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-11-25 23:19 [#00456473]
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Make a many-catheaded hydra!

:)


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-25 23:44 [#00456490]
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gasp!
LeCoeur's cat took over her body!


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-25 23:47 [#00456493]
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damn, she's not even on right now haha


 

offline DaWeeze from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-11-25 23:50 [#00456494]
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As she would say...

ehehehehe =o)

And I say: :D


 

offline Mickey Mouse from The Moon on 2002-11-25 23:59 [#00456495]
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and I say this


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-26 00:04 [#00456498]
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haha great picture!
i like your current avatar too ;) better than that black &
white one


 

offline DaWeeze from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-11-26 00:11 [#00456500]
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U SCARED TEH B!

:(


 

offline Crocomire from plante (United States) on 2002-11-26 02:15 [#00456587]
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lol @ DaWeeze Irish poem

haphazard mallard calling card order for more sherbert
pilfered at the border like Battlestar Galactica
hectic warp-factor tactics on crack


 

offline neetta from Finland on 2002-11-26 02:16 [#00456588]
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i have many poems i can share but they are all in finnish
and no point in translating


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-26 06:38 [#00456813]
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you can post one in finnish if you'd like, i never said they
had to be in english ;)


 

offline korben dallas from nz on 2002-11-26 07:08 [#00456828]
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Aye


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-26 07:17 [#00456833]
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oi


 

offline Laserbeak from Netherlands, The on 2002-11-26 07:21 [#00456839]
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OK I'll make a dark poem for you

here goes:

As you lay in a pool of dead flies
and dogs chew on your skin
and birds pick out your eyes
and snow covers your your every sin
and your body is starting to decay
and glorious deathfumes appear
you'll never again see a living day
because hell has taken over here

end

Hey, it's dark and it (sort of) rhymes... :)


 

offline DJ Xammax from not America on 2002-11-26 10:57 [#00456984]
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Quite good laserbeak!

Okay here is mine:

This is a poem
The End



 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-26 12:23 [#00457080]
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that's perfect!


 

offline DJ Xammax from not America on 2002-11-26 12:27 [#00457092]
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Thanks BILE! Btw that goatse thing was overrated..my friends
went on it and told me, I expected some grotesque half-man
half-goat coughing up it's lungs or something.


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-26 12:30 [#00457099]
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it's still rather awful to see... sometimes, late at night,
when i close my eyes, i still see that image; forever burned
into my thoughts


 

offline DJ Xammax from not America on 2002-11-26 12:32 [#00457104]
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I feared I may end up the same, that's why I told my friends
to go on it. :D


 

offline pOgO from behind your belly button fluff on 2002-11-26 13:17 [#00457203]
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I am woman, see me game
You and I are much the same
I can role-play I can frag
I can PK while you lag
I can strafe, duck and snipe
And no, you're not my type
This is one shrew you cannot tame
I am woman, see me game


 

offline DJ Xammax from not America on 2002-11-26 13:41 [#00457237]
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Quite good pOgO :D

Are you any good at online-gaming? Quake3 or Unreal
Tournament? Heh


 

offline pOgO from behind your belly button fluff on 2002-11-26 14:27 [#00457290]
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I like unreal, havent played much quake really

When we get a new pc I wanna get doom3 =oDDDD

I have to drag my ass away from the sims first though. A
crappy game but SO damn addictive !


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-26 14:34 [#00457303]
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i thought The Sims was fun for about 10 minutes, but then I
realized it was just going to be the same crap over and over
and over again, so I deleted it


 

offline pOgO from behind your belly button fluff on 2002-11-26 14:40 [#00457312]
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I had a baby but social services took him away cause I went
to work and left him crying =o(


 

offline DJ Xammax from not America on 2002-11-26 15:07 [#00457348]
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Hehe I named my baby Twonk. Then realized I couldn't get rid
of it so started again. And again.


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-26 17:23 [#00457555]
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*bump

(for LeC)


 


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