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offline weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2002-11-22 20:38 [#00452238]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker



The msgboard might garble this up, but please take some
time and seriously read this and tell me what you think of
it.
thanks

______________________

My world so cold and empty
Succumbing to entropy
Rebuild this palace with substance
Of warmth and tragedy
Doomed to extinction by possessions
only push us further off
How can I accept your gifts
When you ignore my generosity
Leave me to die another day
Take a piece of me, throw it away

Place me into another game
Partially boring, mostly insane
I tire of playing cant you hear it?
I'm enervated, drained spirit
We could be so close, I can feel it
Better to have loved and lost
...Bullshit
Ever loved and never obtained?
Leave me to die another way
Take a piece of me, throw it away

Hate fills this void
made so long ago
Look at your contribution
That soul you ruptured
In attempt to capture
a beast you created
so dirty, body tainted
Leave yours behind, undaunted
Not your head still haunted
but the vessel you flaunted

Short stories I've read
come to know, never again
so childish and simple
Such high standards
for a girl insubstantial
Twist the knife
giver of life
and watch me bleed some more.

Is this why you're here?

Is this your purpose in life?


 

offline Monoid from one source all things depend on 2002-11-22 20:43 [#00452240]
Points: 11010 Status: Lurker



Do you like Linkin Park !?


 

offline DonkeyRhubarb from Saegertown, PA (United States) on 2002-11-22 20:43 [#00452241]
Points: 552 Status: Regular



that's some good shite, you wrote that yourself, stoner? i
especially like the lines: "Place me into another game
Partially boring, mostly insane.." nice, good imagery =0)
A+



 

offline weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2002-11-22 20:45 [#00452242]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to Monoid: #00452240



No i dont like lincoln park


 

offline weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2002-11-22 20:46 [#00452244]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to DonkeyRhubarb: #00452241



Thank you DonkeyRhubarb! I'm already feeling better after
listening to sad sad songs and writing this.


 

offline fleetmouse from Horny for Truth on 2002-11-22 21:08 [#00452250]
Points: 18042 Status: Lurker



You'll feel better after a few weeks of spending your
evenings smoking cigarettes, masturbating and crying.


 

offline weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2002-11-23 00:33 [#00452378]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to fleetmouse: #00452250



It will get much worse than that. Most likely illegal drugs
bought from terrorists will be involved. I'm off to go
support terrorism, laters.


 

offline C738 from Outer Space on 2002-11-23 02:29 [#00452434]
Points: 1722 Status: Regular



Maybe this will help you weathered

Can anybody hear me?
Cause Im standing here right now
Does anybody see me?
Do you care at all?

condemned into the shadows
I am living like a ghost
people looking straight through me
is what hurts the most

the world so cold, alone
is there a closed zone?
around me... city streets - nomansland
a hard concrete environment

depression in the air
hatred trouble everywhere
has everyone gone insane?
has everyone lost their brain?

fear on the streets in the alleyways
I remember the good old days
when things werent the same
before the dark clouds came

but I was just a child
no knowledge of a world so wild
so sick so cruel so empty and frozen
is this the fate we all have chosen?

can I feel warmth can I feel love?
In dark clouds the so called lord above
I realize life is just a sick game
play it by the rules and you end up with no name

manipulate the system
and life a life like paradise
manipulate the system
and realize

with every breath - life's a game
until your death - life's a game
when things go wrong - life's a game
just stand strong - life's a game

life's a game
life's a game
life's a game
life's a game

-------------------
:)


 

offline Cfern from Sacto (United States) on 2002-11-23 05:14 [#00452502]
Points: 1384 Status: Lurker



\lk;j


 

offline glass_eater from a blind nerves area (Switzerland) on 2002-11-23 05:24 [#00452509]
Points: 4904 Status: Regular



weather :
i like it, but at the end i would have just repeat is this
why ur here?
instead of is this your purpose in life...
just change that simple thing believe me it will do fine



 


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