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BlatantEcho
from All over (United States) on 2002-12-10 00:38 [#00475912]
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--it--
this is it that emotion the one everyone describes
this is it that elation of which everybody rhymes
love love love pain pain and hate this time, it’s all love baby oh man what a wait!
She’s an angel I’m her tough guy She’s the cutie Arm in arm we both wear smiles
You know how long I had to wait? A few albums, a lump of songs, It almost seemed like it was too late (About a life’s worth of pain)
But I got it, that feeling So much so that like you I’m singing Two words in a verse that don’t make sense Rhyme cuz I’m in love like sheep jumping over a fence
Well it all came true The dreams that I tried To revise in my sleep Yeah, there twice as sweet in real life
I’m next to her when I gotta be I’m close to her when I wanna be I’m finally in love with someone Seems like from this point on Not one thing can ever go wrong
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hevquip
from megagram dusk sect (United States) on 2002-12-10 00:54 [#00475921]
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ah, how sweet, ya big softie...GROW UP YOU BIG WHIPPED PUSSY. just kidding. i think i've been feeling what you've been feeling and it feels GOOD.
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BlatantEcho
from All over (United States) on 2002-12-10 01:03 [#00475929]
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hey man, it is weird, I just wanted to say and share that. Nothing more, this felt like the best place to share.
It is the most amazing gathering of sensations
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hevquip
from megagram dusk sect (United States) on 2002-12-10 01:06 [#00475931]
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the big bummer for me though is...that moment in the future when it all comes to an end. it's like no matter how good i feel, i still think about that coming moment.
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BlatantEcho
from All over (United States) on 2002-12-10 01:35 [#00475957]
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fight the future man, it won't be a unhappy ending unless the present was wonderful
if you make it really wonderful now, maybe it won't ever end.
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Refund
from Melbourne (Australia) on 2002-12-10 03:30 [#00476043]
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that was beautiful,.. I thought it was song lyrics for a second though,..
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BlatantEcho
from All over (United States) on 2002-12-10 09:32 [#00476467]
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I don't like poetry, so I always imagine what I write as song lyrics. Just to a song I can don't know how to sing, more than likely just don't want to.
thanks for the words though, made my morning :)
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raimons
from Stockholm (Sweden) on 2002-12-10 09:33 [#00476468]
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I feel like shit...deja vu ( suicidal tendencies ) love that line.
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BlatantEcho
from All over (United States) on 2002-12-10 10:49 [#00476552]
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wrote these both last night, or the night before, I can't stop fawning over this girl.......
--count to more--
I want more How much I’m just not sure
She wants to take it slow I’m tripping all over myself 3-2-1 I could have sworn she already said go
I need to pace this out Pace it, as I race it, around the floor
and I’ll count to four Lest I force it like I’ve done before
I’m really ready to get go, gone And wisk you off to a better land Slip a smile in your direction Walk into the sun, counting stars: hand in hand
Fast come on go, I want my future with you to come up faster I’m speeding towards you like a racer But you slow my heart down like lagging pace car
I guess I’ll count to ten And breathe in Your warm embrace Will suffice until we’ll run away
Give me more I’m low on gas left to pass the time It seems I’m left idling as the world flies by
So ready, on the count of three, Say yes when I ask you to marry me Not yet? Damn
Well I guess I can wait a tiny bit more I swear though, I will only wait just a little longer now
Fuck, Who am I kidding, your so perfect and pretty You have to the count of infinity
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BlatantEcho
from All over (United States) on 2002-12-10 15:35 [#00476841]
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all these songs, and then she comes into my class right before my final starts to give me a kiss
------------- I feel 20 more pages of this crap comming on :)
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Refund
from Melbourne (Australia) on 2002-12-10 15:39 [#00476852]
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ok soo,. she kissed you,.. and now you can't study? right? short attention span my arse,.. you're thinking of something else
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glass_eater
from a blind nerves area (Switzerland) on 2002-12-10 15:39 [#00476854]
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cool blatant loves along dont screw it up be patient! :)
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BlatantEcho
from All over (United States) on 2002-12-10 15:41 [#00476861]
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no, she came INTO my final, right before it started, and gave me a kiss
that blew my mind, but I can't study either way.
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BlatantEcho
from All over (United States) on 2002-12-10 15:41 [#00476863]
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i like that glass :)
*writes down*
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spoonz
from Edmonton, AB (Canada) on 2002-12-10 20:51 [#00477155]
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poetry = fucking good therapy
those were awesome by the way. really well written and that.
they could make a tripped out f-train style track if you recorded them right :)
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Neto
from Ecatepec (Mexico) on 2002-12-10 21:04 [#00477167]
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i think one line is inspired by one Björk lyric
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