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ok, let's have it... out with it... bad poetry |
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"pain" by john-paul kramer pain is "pain-esque" it's not LIKE pain, it IS pain pain is natural with artificial fruit flavors. life... pain makes it more colorful like an explosion of chewy masochism in your mouth hurray! yay! pain! did you ever think "hey, pain is painful" well it IS... dummy. |
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wow....that's deep |
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meow: -------- meow you’re gonna poem always i’m laughing at p-stop what’s with this too tired win i think i shot it at e-laugh i got dolls cause away win i’m gonna easy dawn fool 2, 3, sometimes 6 man foe don’t quit your day line with dance i got man line booby slugger what’s up |
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there spect: --------------- I respect you with utmost paper respect do I withold lope enva giving with a fake dime fax it to sheet with real paper cover one you under repeat dime wishful think gate metaphor you I would like it over there please. Just place it over there. It goes over there. I respect lope money launder from uneath shaft paper slip white forward coffee on a call break I forward lope and I dialed your message fine. Hello may I call you or is it Mrs which would you prefer is it given or a second line do you have the slip or is it just a nominal fee |
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soup control: ---------------- Real chicken for a soup control I took a taste with laddle spoon control Steamy steam up my nose, out my ears with pizza year and a martian soup kitchen no better you eat and she grows pets idea of someone with soup laws feeding with an earth shark but laddle laws control bot it’s understood away with a mecca thing without thinking David at the laughter thing it was way too loud with a soup control I understood but not OK? I passed it off as a bot control. It got it real with a people face plate the face its real to someone it’s complex with a taste of real boys are real with pizza time somethings for phrase with soup skip mind gives away with gay control outlandsish away with real control soup will choke with a laddle mind. |
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"duran duran" what's with this duran guy? and why is he so gay? |
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as i wake up in the morning glory my head is filled with madness stress turns over and becomes my day where did i put my glasses what time is it tik-tok tik-tok off to work my little prodigy |
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"karma chameleon" whenever i hear this song i feel kinda weird like, maybe i'm gay too then i realise i'm not and i turn it off |
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"mullets" what's up with that crap? |
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make me white i said to the snow cold glitter in blue eyes blue as the ocean reflected in the sky and from the sky the snow dances down make me white i said to the snow |
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"first date" so... are we gonna have sex or what? |
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"i like it" well, i DO. |
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The 5 Sections of Hospital Angles Fortified Wall: Split Two. Section 1. Repeat against wall 2 fold Fortified Wall: Split 2 Section 2. Injury against 90 degree angle. Accoustic speakers talk against black window pain. Men in white. Fortified Wall: Split 2 Section 3. Against metal bed Collapse of the empire Doorknobs Collapse of the empire Injury against the the paralell doors Security Fortified Wall: Split 2 Section 4. Let go Needle Leg go Let go Gel go Red cotton Fortified Wall: Split 2 Section 5. Nightmare and then woke up against 90 degree angle. Sweat on Y axis Head on X axis Swallow Dismal action. |
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this one's by a friend of mine... "two words" two words |
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hahahahaha nice one, amon this one is about a girl who broke up with me once: "do you even realise how much of a slut you've been?" seriously. |
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Dude, i seriously really enjoyed 'Two Words' That was mind expanding. dude...thats caving my head in. *ponders on potential meanings* |
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ok, here's another one my friend wrote: "catapult c" clang bachelor in a mink coat waltz timing garage manual overide 10-10-220 stage set for insecticon fortress take it in to the butcher of buttbeezly this is where it all began before time began it began right here the dance of little lord lollipop and his loyal royal fronters beware beware take care beware |
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dude, beware |
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ok, now im in a weird mood, im just gonna start making this crap up |
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Since the poem is called two words and in fact the poem consists of the words 'two words' there are 4 words...2 because of a mirror. Or there could be 4 sets of 2. Two | Two / Words | Words. The poem to me is about a mirror. an image on contradiction. since there really are technically 4 words (if put on a blank page) it sort of has a nice pattern of infinity. as if you put a mirror to a mirror...it goes on and on. thus this poem is about Pie. it has no definate number. it goes on and on with no end. the 2 words mirror themselves to 4. then to 8 and so on. nice image. many thanks to your friend Tibbar |
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2 sets of two sorry |
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ill let him know you liked it |
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i just sent him an e-mail with your comments, im sure he will be extatic! |
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I could see John Cage really getting a kick out of that poem too. incredible. |
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no prob :) please tell me what he says to my thoughts on the poem! post here |
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so here we go!, time to gimp out! "cabbage people" stop it! stop eating them up they have rights too, you know the right to stop stopping when i stop them you hat pickle in the ear you can't help yourself, can you? can you? you make me sick with your "R" sure, you play your games i'll just be over here walking my furnace jerk |
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ok, i'm on a roll... "101 ways to love squarepusher" ok people the first thing to remember when flossing it, is that the baggage check is in the second. 4. 1993. khakis. count rappula. got it? C+C music factory you know you dance |
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"i met jason alexander, and he has b.o." fresh as a dj jazzy jeff & the french... it was so long ago... david lynch was there sure he was you know what else? i remember i remember burt lancaster bought me my first creme brulee i love you but why do you only wear over-alls? one size fits... some... i loved you why didn't you do a cameo on FRIENDS? would that have been SO WRONG??? you never even tasted popcorn chicken bastard. |
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wow! seriously... that works on SO many levels. that's probably the best yet. ;) hehe |
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which? the one i just posted? |
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heheh yeah. |
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dude, seriously? the best poem ever. there, i went ahead and said what everyone else was thinking. |
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you KNOW it's true!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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To Make A Square - For six voices and piano. Voice 1 repeats: Conjure Voice 2 repeats after 1: Trap in Voice 3 repates after 2: Pif Voice 4 repeats after 3: CACK! Voice 5 repeats after 4: An apple a day keeps the doctor away Voice 6 repeats after 5: Done |
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"xltronic, why don't you return my calls?" come on, baby... i promise i won't do it gain i can change i WILL change, for you for US... we can be together and happy, or apart and miserable which one do you want? i know if you search your heart, you'll see that you still want to be with me i want to grow old with you... we're soul mates, can't you see that? i want to have your children, doesn't that MEAN anything to you anymore? please, just give me another chance everyone makes mistakes, you know? i love you. |
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"xltronic, sometimes you make me SO mad!" i work all day, and i come home to THIS?!? i don't bust my hump so i can come home and have kids screamin' in my ear, and have to clean up dog crap off the carpet!!! you better start doing your share around here, or your out! you here me?!? OUT!!! and if you start cryig, i'll give you something to REALLY cry about! and where's my dinner?!?* *no message boards were harmed in the making of this poem. admin discression is advised. |
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"xltronic, will you marry me?" look, the reason i brought you out here... well, there's something special i want to say... i know we've been together for a long time, and i know you've always been worried about me not wanting to make a real commitment... but i think the time is right for us to make the next step... i'm saying... xltronic? will you marry me? don't... don't say anything just yet... i know it's a bit sudden, but it's been something i think we've been putting off for a LONG time. you don't have to answer me right here and now, think it over if you have to... i want us to do the right thing. i don't want to picture my life without you in it. we can think about getting that site up after the honeymoon, i know you've always wanted that. just, say yes? |
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you guys crack me up!! Remember Steve Martin in "The man with two brains"..... Pointy Bird "O pointy birds, o pointy pointy, Anoint my head, anointy-nointy." |
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by the same guy!!! In Dillan's Grove "In Dillan's Grove my love did die, and now in ground shall ever lie. None could ever replace her visage, until your face brought thoughts of kissage." |
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i´m making this one up as i go i feel i´m witty - "let it show!" fair enough then, my young muse i´m surprised, after i, you, abuse |
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the answer is hard to trace but it's true i guess paradise is not a place it's a form of consiousness |
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binary poetry: 0110 110001 101110 110 00110100 011110 00111 0110 10 001 1000111 1100001001 110011 11001 11110 1100010 0111 100110 10100 1011110 10010 010100001 011000010 |
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POETRY IN MOTION |
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