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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-11-29 20:30 [#00461757]
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Here is the second of thesongs I have been working on for Demos sake...this one is slightly different as in it hasa vague melody running through out it...actually it is quite like my old F.L.E.A stuff..
porntorn
feedback please..your replies and critique so far has been very helpful..
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-29 20:40 [#00461764]
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getting it now.. I'll get back to you tomorrow..
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-11-29 20:43 [#00461766]
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cool..cheers qrter:)
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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-11-29 20:59 [#00461771]
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hmmm
well, i liked it... everything there is good, BUT... it think it was lacking something... like it felt like it should have built up. or gone somewhere.
dunno
i really lilked the rythems
it sounded very tri repetaeish... espeically that little back ground melody
overall good, but i think it needs alittle more
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-11-29 21:02 [#00461773]
Points: 9083 Status: Regular | Followup to Zeus: #00461771
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hmm you hit it on the head Tri Repetae/Early Funkstorung was the inspiration...
thanks..I will be tweaking both the tracks..
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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-11-29 21:05 [#00461775]
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np
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-11-29 21:13 [#00461779]
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not as good as the uther. it didn't really get going right away. at the start it was more like something to show off effects rather than something that someone would seriously listen to for the aesthetic pleasure or something, but near the middle and end it got much better. the melody got a lot better too, (it was kinda wimpily near the begerning.)
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