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JAroen
from the pineal gland on 2002-11-09 08:11 [#00434389]
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well not really..
its kinda cheesy imo and not 100% finished but.. well click here someone please download it and gimme tips/ tell me how much i suck.
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uzim
on 2002-11-09 08:27 [#00434400]
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not bad! yes, maybe a little cheesy in parts, but i liked it. :)
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JAroen
from the pineal gland on 2002-11-09 08:32 [#00434405]
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thanks!
there are parts really like beetles, or the musicbox sound of nanou. I like those parts best
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glass_eater
from a blind nerves area (Switzerland) on 2002-11-09 08:32 [#00434406]
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i liked it and i loved the melody just add a little more powerfull beats and it will be nice! :)
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JAroen
from the pineal gland on 2002-11-09 08:35 [#00434411]
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yeah the drums are still a bit faint imo
thanks everyone
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surrounded
from it won't be hard anymore to li on 2002-11-09 10:35 [#00434448]
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i enjoyed it. You shouldn't have said it sounds cheesy. i wouldn't have noticed.
But now i thought: "yeh he's right, it does sound a bit cheesy" ;-)
still liked it though
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DJ Xammax
from not America on 2002-11-09 12:46 [#00434564]
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Cheese is good in the right doses, with good humour and when the person behind it knows.
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DJ Xammax
from not America on 2002-11-09 12:47 [#00434566]
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Sorry I couldn't download it, but unless it's absolutely necessary I ain't downloading anything with my PC this slow. Maybe next time.
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RetuoW
from behind you (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-09 13:12 [#00434579]
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hehe like it, its already better then the last songs ;)
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-09 13:39 [#00434600]
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2 tips:
- don't post a track until it IS 100% finished. - don't say all that stuff like "tell me how much i suck" when you post something - you don't need that (if you really do, you wouldn't post at all).
this sounds a lot harsher than I mean it to.. :)
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-09 13:44 [#00434603]
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aaanyway, I listened.. it does sound quite cheesy.. I don't like the sounds you use.. the synth starting from the beginning is awful (but then again, I hate synths..).. I do like the 'plinky' melody. again, the bass is a NO.. why use a sound that sounds like a bass but not quite when you could use a real bass - thats what makes cheesy music cheesy..
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-11-09 14:09 [#00434626]
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It seemed like a fairly lame beginning with drums trying to stumble into alignment in a pattern, but when the chimy melody round came in, it sounded great. Then it went away and all the parts sort of aimlessly colided in and out like at the control of a drunk composer... or computer software.
Since I'm a music expert I'll give a tip; expand the pattern with 2wice or... uh.. 4wice, the amount of empty space, so you can put more microscopic changes and details in the sound.
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J198
from Maastricht (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-10 06:37 [#00435161]
Points: 7342 Status: Lurker | Followup to JAroen: #00434389 | Show recordbag
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nice..
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JAroen
from the pineal gland on 2002-11-10 06:51 [#00435162]
Points: 16065 Status: Regular | Followup to qrter: #00434600
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qrter: im not planning to make music for money, and i wasnt really serious so...
w M w: im rearranging everything, it is rather aimless
the sounds: the only program i used was fruty loops, the synths are just lame midi patches and my sample collection isn't that great
but thanks for the comments
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-10 10:12 [#00435353]
Points: 47414 Status: Moderator | Followup to JAroen: #00435162
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this has nothing to do with whether you want to make money or not. I think its just kind of courtesy to boardmembers, I guess... :)
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