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LET'S WRITE HAIKUS!!
 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:08 [#00393206]
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haiku is three lines long.

first line: 5 syllables
second line: 7 syllables
third line: 5 syllables


 

offline Amonbrune from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:10 [#00393208]
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Time Travel

The past resembled forgotten thoughts
I never knew you could do that
I want to escape now


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:10 [#00393209]
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pharmaceuticals
undiscriminatingly
contaminating


 

offline Amonbrune from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:11 [#00393210]
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Summertime

Three around the hollow tree
Hands grasped either person on either side
The sound of singing came


 

offline DaWeeze from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-10-04 23:11 [#00393211]
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Message board is slow
Filled with nonsense, strange and cracked
DaWeeze loses space...


 

offline Amonbrune from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:12 [#00393212]
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oops i thought you meant words

k i screwed up big time...


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:12 [#00393213]
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dammit amon -- didn't you read the goddam specifications!
don't you know what a syllable is??


 

offline Amonbrune from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:13 [#00393215]
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YES I DO!!! now at least...



 

offline DaWeeze from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-10-04 23:14 [#00393216]
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BadOrb plays in ears
Strange Orb-like sounds make me glad
I love this album!


 

offline Amonbrune from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:14 [#00393217]
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Amon's Sorry-Time Haiku

Lets try this again
I messed up so bad darn it
Amonbrune good boy


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:18 [#00393220]
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amonbrune must die
he has spoilt mystic haiku
now he must be killed


 

offline DaWeeze from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-10-04 23:21 [#00393222]
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Chill the fuck out boys
Everyone makes some mistakes
Go back and have fun


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:25 [#00393224]
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DaWeeze is buddha
bringing happy peace to all
at X-L-tronic


 

offline DaWeeze from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-10-04 23:30 [#00393226]
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I'm a minor god
Can lift heavy things and throw
Need own TV show


 

offline Amonbrune from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:31 [#00393227]
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AMONBRUNE IS ANGRY
YOU HAVE DISRUPTED MY SLEEP
I SHALL NOW TOUCH YOU


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:42 [#00393234]
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marlowe is minor-
-keyed symphony of sadness
now comes the coda


 

offline Amonbrune from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:43 [#00393238]
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Sean Booth and Rob Brown
Destroy your city with sound
You're left quivering


 

offline pachi from yo momma (United States) on 2002-10-04 23:53 [#00393250]
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don't forget tankas as well ;) :

line 1) 5 syllables
line 2) 7 syllables
line 3) 5 syllables
line 4) 7 syllables
line 5) 7 syllables

i'm currently doing haikus in my german class at school, so
i find this coincidental. i'll do a haiku in german then:

Toilettenpapier
Man kann ohne stinkende
Händer abwischen


 

offline Amonbrune from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:58 [#00393254]
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LETS GET IT ON HARD
YOU COB OF CORN SO JUICY
GET IN MY BELLY


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-05 00:10 [#00393265]
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keep your ponsey tankas to yourself motherfucker! and don't
bring any stinking Rennets - (4-4-6-6- 10-l2), or
Rictameters - (2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2) here either!

ok!


 

offline roygbivcore from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2002-10-05 00:14 [#00393268]
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amonbrune, get this
your topics are good natured, but
they will not save you


 

offline pachi from yo momma (United States) on 2002-10-05 00:29 [#00393276]
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*dismisses Mr. Tanka, Miss Rennet, and Dr. Rictameter*

standing in my crib
teddy glaring with queer eyes
rattle by my foot


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-05 00:35 [#00393278]
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oh syd barret oh
i love to hear your music
because i love you


 

offline J198 from Maastricht (Netherlands, The) on 2002-10-05 04:26 [#00393381]
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some of the best haiku's i've ever read are in Fight Club


 

offline pOgO from behind your belly button fluff on 2002-10-05 04:51 [#00393385]
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You know what I hate?
Please release me let me go
That song sucks so bad


 

offline Jimmy James from Burnaby (Canada) on 2002-10-05 06:59 [#00393410]
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haiku's fuckin' rule!
I love to think them up, it
takes no time at all


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 19:32 [#00395738]
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dear mister richard
elusive demands answer
respond if you can


 

offline roygbivcore from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2002-10-07 22:38 [#00395914]
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sometimes i wonder
do you remember me now?
i was a moose once


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 22:43 [#00395916]
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i am a turnip
please do not eat up my flesh
i rather like it


 

offline rarndaraki from from from from (United States) on 2002-10-07 22:44 [#00395917]
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great avatar roy
I like the colors and shapes
its very soothing


 

offline rarndaraki from from from from (United States) on 2002-10-07 22:46 [#00395920]
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music is a joy
poop is a boy toy and i
i am everything


 

offline rarndaraki from from from from (United States) on 2002-10-07 22:47 [#00395921]
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i think i am good
writing haikus in the hood
i think i am smart

im a big fart
there aint no talent to this
save my broken heart


 

offline pachi from yo momma (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:09 [#00395931]
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a sandbed plateau
a night of uncertainty
someone watches us


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 23:12 [#00395933]
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a fly am i am
i a fly am i am i
a fly? me? i am!


 

offline afxNUMB from So.Flo on 2002-10-07 23:22 [#00395939]
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Desire me tonight
Your hands caress my body so...
To cum is such joy


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 23:29 [#00395942]
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my hand is sticky
i have cum while jerking off
to pictures of you


 

offline Zeus from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:32 [#00395944]
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oh i wish i was
an oscar myer weiner
this, i want to be


 

offline diemax from somewhere in tennessee :( (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:35 [#00395945]
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marlowe is sexy
i would like to squeeze him
covering my eyes


 

offline diemax from somewhere in tennessee :( (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:35 [#00395946]
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now can we stop this nonsense?


 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 23:38 [#00395948]
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never diemax, NO!
a haiku a day is my
most evilest aim


 

offline pachi from yo momma (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:43 [#00395953]
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i am the snowfrog
i wait atop the glacier
leap, descend, impact



 

offline marlowe from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 23:45 [#00395955]
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haikus are fun
haikus are addictive stuff
my haiku. the end.


 

offline diemax from somewhere in tennessee :( (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:47 [#00395957]
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i will kill you all
i will defile your remains
and devour your skin


 


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