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offline Monoid from one source all things depend on 2007-11-04 11:24 [#02140792]
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This is my first try, so don't laugh.

Everlasting pictures from here,
right through infinity.

All my words are wrapped inside,
so they won't escape.
What removed the colours
stays for another day.
Can't say nothing,
but I don't wanna abandon
- no no no -
the way I dream.

Words won't come easy,
when you kiss the sky.
I feel it in my heart,
I feel it in my head,
but no reply.
Can't say nothing,
but I don't wanna abandon
- no no no -
they way I see.




 

offline stefano_azevedo from Pindorama (Brazil) on 2007-11-04 11:27 [#02140793]
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lol


 

offline Combo from Sex on 2007-11-04 11:28 [#02140794]
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llo


 

offline cygnus from nowhere and everyplace on 2007-11-04 11:28 [#02140795]
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did you use google translate to get that text? it looks like
you translated it from another language. i laughed for a
couple seconds at "what removed the colours"


 

offline kurrrak from Bialystok (Poland) on 2007-11-04 11:32 [#02140796]
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I think I'm going to listen to Tokyo Hotel now.


 

offline Monoid from one source all things depend on 2007-11-04 11:32 [#02140797]
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Yeah, Im german, Id like to see you write a german song!


 

offline stefano_azevedo from Pindorama (Brazil) on 2007-11-04 11:32 [#02140798]
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See that thing more beautiful
More full of grace
It is girl
What comes and goes
In a sweet stock
The path of the sea

Moça body gold
The sun of lpanema
Its balançado is more than one poem
It is the most beautiful thing that I have seen passing

Oh, why am I so alone?
Ah, that everything is so sad?
Ah, the beauty that exists
The beauty is not only my
What also goes alone

Ah, if she knew
That when she passes
The world inteirinho if fills with grace
And it is more beautiful
Because of love


 

offline CS2x from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-11-04 11:42 [#02140799]
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Double, double toil and trouble;
Fire burn, and caldron bubble.



 

offline Monoid from one source all things depend on 2007-11-04 11:48 [#02140800]
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So, you dont like it or what?


 

offline stefano_azevedo from Pindorama (Brazil) on 2007-11-04 12:04 [#02140802]
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i do


 

offline w M w from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-11-04 12:06 [#02140804]
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It doesn't sound like a song as there is no singing and its
just text.


 

offline cygnus from nowhere and everyplace on 2007-11-04 12:06 [#02140805]
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its ok


 

offline Monoid from one source all things depend on 2007-11-04 12:17 [#02140817]
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Well...try to sing it


 

offline w M w from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-11-05 00:30 [#02141008]
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Are you supposed to sing it like Jewel style or Dr. Dre
style?


 

offline glasse from Harrisburg (United States) on 2007-11-06 14:00 [#02141471]
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Here you go, just for you..

TIEF ATME DURCH
ES IST ERLAUBT ZU GENIESSEN
SEI OHNE FURCHT
WERDE FAST TAUB

NICHT WAHRZUNEHMEN - ES ZU ERLEBEN
DICH BEGEHREN HEISST DIR VERGEBEN
LIEBE IST RAUB

HALT MICH FEST
LASS NIE LOS
EINS MIT DIR
GEH NIE FORT

BERUHRE MICH
KUSSE DEN HIMMEL HIER AUF ERDEN
IN MEIN GEHEIMNIS WEIH' ICH DICH EIN
SINN UND SEIN
HEILUNG UND LUST
SEI MEIN LEBEN
SEI UNVERNUNFTIG
BABY SEI MEIN
LASS MICH GLUCKLICH SEIN


 

offline Monoid from one source all things depend on 2007-11-16 04:54 [#02144075]
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Celine DIon style.

http://de.youtube.com/watch?v=lrOu-Xy4C_c


 

offline pigster from melbs on 2007-11-16 06:35 [#02144091]
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i too have written a song.
this is it here. there it is.


 


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