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offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-26 08:18 [#02066332]
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here's a pop song that i recorded last night/this morning.

choices [4MB]

hope you enjoy it, cheers.


 

offline dog_belch from Netherlands, The on 2007-03-26 11:12 [#02066397]
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Ha! That's pretty fucking hot! I got a shivery thrill of
being back at the 6th Form art room, of fighting over the
cassette player with tapes of My Bloody Valentine et al. It
makes me think favorably of them and the first Seam album,
which is neither here nor there, only that I rate both
highly and this is up there with them. I love the guitar
sound, which sounds like a stupid thing to say, but I do.
That's a really a great song, that's the best pop guitar
CLASSIC INDIE ... hell it's just a great song, the best I've
heard for a long time. I've got the Indie Shivers which I've
not felt for some time, I'm glad there is still the
possibility.


 

offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-26 11:31 [#02066404]
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the 'indie shivers'! haha, excellent :)

thank you very much for saying so, i'm glad you liked it. i
think there may be a few incarnations in the near future, as
all this talk of mbv has given me some ideas.


 

offline ecnadniarb on 2007-03-26 15:04 [#02066500]
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Quality stuff Mr Jack.
I have never been into this type of music but even to my
untrained ears I can tell it is better than 99% of the shit
released now.
You should get a record contract thingy with Warp, they
would like this.


 

offline Drunken Mastah from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2007-03-26 15:14 [#02066501]
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To me this doesn't sound like anything different from
anything else I've heard of this kind of pop lately. That
being said, that kind of music seems to be pretty popular,
and every new clone released is hailed as the new king by
the reviewers, so you may be able to do well, and if you
like doing it, if you're having fun, keep it up, but I would
just like to urge you to make something at least slightly
more inventive/new.


 

offline ecnadniarb on 2007-03-26 15:16 [#02066502]
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Have you heard his other stuff? He is fucking awesome
mate.

myspace

Take a listen to xylophobe.


 

offline Drunken Mastah from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2007-03-26 15:28 [#02066504]
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xylophobe was better. It kind of reminds me of some old
skool hip hop for some reason. I never liked it when a kick
or snare or whatever is constantly distorted, though.. I
think it sounds better if you only use the effect in certain
places, but that may be just me.

The other songs, bar the similar-ish generic pop song, were
also quite nice.


 

offline Gwely Mernans from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-03-26 15:30 [#02066505]
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not my cup of tea, but quite good for what it is.


 

offline Brisk from selling smack at the orphanage on 2007-03-26 15:54 [#02066515]
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Yes, I agree. Well produced and pleasent to the ears, but
this kind of sound has never really hit my musical sweet
spots. But as evidenced from this thread, the people who do
like this indie/pop hybrid seem to like it, so you have
obviously nailed it for your target audience!

Well done sir.


 

offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-26 15:58 [#02066517]
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thank you for listening and for your comments, and thanks
for the plug lee.

drunken, making something 'new' is all very well but it
doesn't half get tedious. personally, i start worrying more
about being original than actually making decent music that
i enjoy.
also i'm not sure i entirely understand what you mean by
"that kind of music" and all of its "clones" - do you mean
"generic pop"?

anyway, i've been working a second version of this track,
with more noise, distorted guitars, feedback, etc... plus a
slightly better mix. it sounds more complete now.

(...currently uploading... slowly...)


 

offline dog_belch from Netherlands, The on 2007-03-26 16:00 [#02066519]
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Because I am so elderly and infirm I used to be into "indie"
music when it was still possible to respond to the question
"What kind of music do you like?" and the answer "Urrr,
Indie, really" would 9 times out of 10 bring the response
"Indian?" From the Indie Year Zero of 86, the zenith of all
achievment in 1988 to the golden haze of the Happy 90s...
but

INDIE DIED IN 1997
How?
Oasis release "Be Here Now"
Stereophonics release their debut
Travis release their debut album
Limp Bizkit release their debut album
Verve release "Urban Hymns" and split up for the second
time, Richard Ashcroft going on to embark on the most boring
solo career in pop history.
Mogwai, realising that Slint had the dignity to record just
two albums and leave it at that, decide to make a career out
of copying them badly, and inspiring a million other bands
to pretend they'd heard of Slint and make similar loud/quiet
"experimental" rock.
Aphex releases the indie/dance crossover "Come to Daddy",
attracts the most annoying global fanbase apart from
Autechre's , and spends the rest of his life paying for it.


These facts combined with The Collective History of Pop
being wiped by the beheomoth that is "Ok Computer" meant
that Indie Music, unless it sounded like a weak version of
Ok Computer, or some comedy sports rap, just withered and
died. All the good bands that were around before this
Massive Shit all failed to bother to come back, no more My
Bloody Valentine, no Pixies, no Jesus & Mary Chain, to name
some of the more famous. I think only Echo & The Bunnymen
bothered after splitting up so many times they'd forgotten
if they were currently together or not.

The "indie" music I hear today is rubbish. It takes the
worst aspects of Post-Punk, Indie, or comedy Goth, and makes
it so horrible only kids dizzy with their own egos and
hormones can bear it. Even painful art rock twinned with
electronica sucks arse. But surely the pulse lives on,
somewhere...

I think it lives on in Leeds.





 

offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-26 16:08 [#02066521]
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whether you want it or not, here's the second version...

choices (take2) [5MB]


 

offline Drunken Mastah from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2007-03-26 17:08 [#02066533]
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I actually agree 100% with just doing what you like, etc,
and not worrying about what you're making (I never do myself
either), but it's just a more elaborate way of stating that
I didn't really like the track, and also giving reasons as
to why I didn't; I commented on the track.

Yeah, generic pop music.


 

offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-26 17:19 [#02066535]
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ah, ok. fair enough, now it makes sense.

although, you do seem to excel in confusing people :)


 

offline OK on 2007-03-26 17:25 [#02066538]
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i wish i could write stuff like that


 

offline dog_belch from Netherlands, The on 2007-03-26 17:45 [#02066541]
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New mix is nicer still, more rounded, makes the song sound..
even better. It was driving me mad thinking of who it was
that it reminds me of..f. At first I thought Sonic Youth and
then the more poppy period of Dinosaur Jnr. There is
something distinctly transatlantic sounding about this
track, if it wasn't for the vocal giving away which side of
the pond it's from. Very good, all in all.


 

offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-26 18:02 [#02066546]
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well, when i started it originally - about a year ago - i
was just trying to do a sonic youth rip off, but when you
strip it down to the basic rhythm guitar it's virtually two
chords in dropped D...

Bm9 (no 3rd)

E|-9
B|-9
G|-11
D|-11
A|-9
D|-9

G9 (no 3rd)

E|-5
B|-5
G|-7
D|-7
A|-5
D|-5

...and when you play those two chords alternately, you're
half way to playing the foo fighters' Everlong.

i imagine this explanation didn't help ease your mind.


 

offline Drunken Mastah from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2007-03-27 06:45 [#02066654]
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Hahah, yeah.. I think I sometimes take too much for granted
in conversation, and I've noticed that the most common
confusion is that people seem to mistake advice or an
utterance of a personal preference as some sort of a
statement about a universal truth or something unless I
explicitly state that "this is only my preference" or,
rather, in this case, or any case of critique/advice, "this
is what I would do."

Of course, there are times when I'm talking more generally
about something that is supposed to be the truth about
something, and even though this is still a personal
utterance, it is to be taken differently from opinions on a
work of music or the best future course of action or stuff
like that, but I usually assume the context makes things
clear enough for everyone.

Oh well, that's a digression. Carry on.


 

offline Akira from out of space on 2007-03-27 06:54 [#02066656]
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didn't give me any shiverz! too bad


 

offline xf from Australia on 2007-03-27 07:56 [#02066671]
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for what it is, it's quite good, really.

the vocals really do sound flat, though; i know it's the
style of the music, but you sound slightly too bored
singing, i think :) improve this, and i think you're onto a
winner.


 

offline xf from Australia on 2007-03-27 08:02 [#02066672]
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^ they sound flat in parts, by the way, not throughout the
whole thing.


 

offline xf from Australia on 2007-03-27 08:23 [#02066677]
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word up to your other tracks on myspace, too - very
impressed.


 

offline mylittlesister from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-27 19:39 [#02066853]
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yeah, i need to redo some of the vocals. some of the backing
vocals sound hilarious when soloed, as i lost my voice.

thank you for listening.


 


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