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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-03-23 15:59 [#02065403]
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Fancy egg and soup, I'm free this evening. The mantra serves up another digital platter for you head bobbers to feast upon.
Enjoy.
And I do say enjoy.
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ecnadniarb
on 2007-03-23 17:28 [#02065439]
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I didn't really enjoy it but I was also neutral towards it in that I didn't not enjoy it either.
Adam F Metropolis is the only track that should be called Metropolis though.
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thatne
from United States on 2007-03-23 17:35 [#02065444]
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dont listen to ecnadniarb about the title.
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ecnadniarb
on 2007-03-23 17:37 [#02065446]
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of course he should.
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-03-23 22:32 [#02065491]
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Not enough salt.
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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-24 08:53 [#02065598]
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I actually did enjoy this and I liked the sounds and basic idea. I just think there should have been more of a developement or build up towards the end/the second half, and that the non-noisy/percussive elements could be more involved, layered, and complex (the pads felt a bit flimsy and boring.)
But seriously, I think it's a good track and could easily be a great track with a bit more work. You know I love all those insectoid noises...
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FlyAgaric
from the discovery (Africa) on 2007-03-24 09:43 [#02065613]
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I didn't like it very much. I enjoyed the voice sample and the atmosphere it created but, then the beat hit.
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-03-24 10:18 [#02065628]
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Thanks for listening. I'll work on this track further.
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futureimage
from buy FIR from Juno (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-25 01:00 [#02065842]
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Yeah, it's definitely good grounds to start on, but needs to develop more in a shorter space of time perhaps.
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rogu rarebit
from beggin' for leggings on 2007-03-25 01:39 [#02065846]
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You disrespecting Kraftwerk?
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-03-25 08:23 [#02065923]
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Well, if any of you feel generous enough to give the refined track a go, and can stomach 'the myspace', here is the better version. V.2
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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-26 15:38 [#02066510]
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This is far better. It's got a real sense of movement and energy, and the second half fucking rocks. I played this a few times in a row. Great stuff!
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ecnadniarb
on 2007-03-26 15:38 [#02066511]
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Yes.
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2007-03-26 15:46 [#02066512]
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Maybe "immerse" the kick more in the track? Right now it pops out like it's on its own. I like those kind of distorted printer sounding sounds, but I kind of can't help the feeling that this is just some sort of "intro to the album" track that's just there to lead up to something else...
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-03-26 15:52 [#02066513]
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CS2x, glad you enjoyed it.. again :)
DM, yeah thats the issue I'm facing now, it does seem like it's leading to something even more energetic, and then cuts short. I'll keep working on it, but won't spam it anymore. Perhaps when the albums done I'll do what I always do, zip it up and share it.
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big
from lsg on 2007-03-26 15:58 [#02066518]
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it's pretty cool. the clicks are nice and the synth is nice, but maybe they don't go together too well imo. the kick isn't all that either
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mylittlesister
from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-26 16:01 [#02066520]
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oh dear, have i downloading the wrong version?
*goes to myspace*
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mylittlesister
from ...wherever (United Kingdom) on 2007-03-26 16:16 [#02066522]
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evidently i can't type correctly either, but anyway on with the track... the second version of the track...
it definitely feels like its building towards something, but never really settles into a groove/beat/whatever that justifies the build up. that always seems to be the problem with stomp beats, especially at slower tempos, such as this, with no driving bassline or rhythmical accompaniment.
some good gritty sounds in there though, although the myspace compression does its best to try and hide them behind eachother.
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