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cx
from Norway on 2007-02-02 17:42 [#02043931]
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i dunno.. fuck it, comments welcomed.
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i_x_ten
from arsemuncher on 2007-02-02 18:00 [#02043940]
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its not a bad piece. but i don't know when i would want to listen to it. very incidental. maybe on learning zone it would be appropriate when Matt Allwright is getting his P45 in a mock disaster down the dole office learn a trade back on the straight and narrow skit, if you know what i mean.
if you're not from the uk that won't make any sense at all
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2007-02-02 18:03 [#02043941]
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I quite liked it, though it lacks depth. How about muting the strings a little bit, EQ them with less treble, and adding a real melody on a woodwind instrument: a fragile melody, fractured maybe, and using sequences with unusual intervals (a flattened 9th suspension would be nice).
Please do that and resubmit for spammage, I want to hear that version.
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cx
from Norway on 2007-02-02 18:04 [#02043942]
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im not :( but thanks for the first sentence :D
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cx
from Norway on 2007-02-02 18:07 [#02043945]
Points: 4537 Status: Regular | Followup to marlowe: #02043941
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yo, thanks.. i think i should extend it a bit.. add a new part with more instruments and do just what you said..
thanks for listening and i will be back later with spam :P
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2007-02-02 18:10 [#02043949]
Points: 24588 Status: Lurker | Followup to cx: #02043945
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I look forward to that -- if you like, send me a MIDI file of it and I'll make my own version of it.
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cx
from Norway on 2007-02-02 19:03 [#02043983]
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New version, but I really suck with flutes and I wanted to keep it 'surreal' like so im not sure about 'real melody' here..
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2007-02-02 19:22 [#02044002]
Points: 24588 Status: Lurker | Followup to cx: #02043983
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I like what you've done with it - sounds far more floaty and ethereal now. Good job homie.
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-02-02 19:35 [#02044011]
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sounds majestic, well done.
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cx
from Norway on 2007-02-02 19:44 [#02044020]
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thanks guys :D
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staz
on 2007-02-02 20:57 [#02044050]
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this is good
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staz
on 2007-02-02 20:58 [#02044051]
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ok minus that flute, it sucks
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cx
from Norway on 2007-02-02 21:38 [#02044061]
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i toned down the flute and strings and put in some bell arpeggio in the middle.. but i have to go to bed im dying.
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